Title: FriendShip is a Ring
By: Me!!
Age: 13 years old
Friendship is Life,
They come and go,
Watching them disappear,
Was something to Blow.
Friendship is Emotion,
From young to old,
They have so many secrets,
They forgot to unfold.
Friendship is a Ring,
To carry all round
Friendship is a bond,
To keep until found.
2007-03-14 12:02:33 · 12 answers · asked by Dreamer 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Thanks everyone! I also write Love and Relationship poems, basically Romance stuff. So If I do post some of those romancey stuff I'm going to post it on Yahoo Singles & Dating area. Thankyou so much with all the comments i'll make more don't worry! :)
2007-03-14 12:27:30 · update #1
aw, what a lovely poem! made me smile :-)
2007-03-14 12:10:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good, you write much better than a normal 13 yr old. Keep up the good work.
2007-03-14 19:09:14 · answer #2 · answered by zack 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow if i could ever write like that i would be so proud of myself. Your poem is INCREDIBLE!!! I love it! Keep writing. Write another one I would absolutely love to hear it!
2007-03-14 19:15:45 · answer #3 · answered by busy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it i know u will be a writer so start writting. make another one i tell u how i like it
2007-03-14 19:09:46 · answer #4 · answered by renee c 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!
KEEP WRITING.
I BET ONE DAY
YOU WILL BE
A PUBLISHED POET!
MUCH LUCK!
2007-03-14 19:06:21 · answer #5 · answered by Jenblossom 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's okay put it on www.ghettosoul.com, that's where I post all of my poetry.
2007-03-14 19:07:35 · answer #6 · answered by Portia P 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
cool
2007-03-14 19:07:40 · answer #7 · answered by caz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really corny butt if it s 4 school ur teacher will probably like it i dont really like it
2007-03-14 19:07:15 · answer #8 · answered by crittergirl 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I didn't like it I loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!Your a great at writying poems!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-03-14 19:09:57 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats great!!
2007-03-14 19:06:25 · answer #10 · answered by lysette.oxo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋