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Bound to the Air, Inside the Water, Rock Strong like Earth, Fights like Fire.

It is a story about a poor girl named Melinda who finds out that she is the Element Princess with magical powers, and that's why her eyes are colored like the sky. They change with her mood. Comment on Name, title, ANYTHING!

2007-03-14 12:02:28 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

Thanks guys, it really helps.

2007-03-14 12:07:28 · update #1

Thanks, I am a Crazy Diamond. I prefer Moonstone though. . .

2007-03-14 12:14:01 · update #2

9 answers

Shine on you crazy Diamond!

2007-03-14 12:09:57 · answer #1 · answered by outlaw_tattoo_biker 4 · 1 0

I think the title is too long, I think the title should be something like" The girl with the sky colored eyes"

2007-03-14 19:09:55 · answer #2 · answered by Barbie! 4 · 1 0

It's a bit long for a story title. I'd pick one of those, like Inside the Water, which is intriguing by itself.

2007-03-14 19:06:21 · answer #3 · answered by §Sally§ 5 · 1 0

I dont like any of the titles - how about Eyes Like the Sky? C.

2007-03-14 19:23:37 · answer #4 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 1 0

I would only leave out "rock", saying Strong Like Earth

Sounds like an interesting story. Best of luck with it.

2007-03-14 19:06:26 · answer #5 · answered by KCBA 5 · 1 0

Any of those would make a good title. They are too long to make a single title.

2007-03-14 19:08:58 · answer #6 · answered by purple_person 2 · 1 0

It''s kind of long...
Try:
The Element Bearer....
The Element Master...
Nature in Life...
Queen of Nature...
etc.

2007-03-14 19:22:38 · answer #7 · answered by Animal_lover 2 · 1 0

I think that the title is nice but maybe it would be better if you shortened it a little bit.

2007-03-14 19:10:41 · answer #8 · answered by alyssa 2 · 1 0

it seems like a great title for your story and can really grip ur audience to read it i would be very interrested

2007-03-14 19:07:07 · answer #9 · answered by eko123 1 · 1 0

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