why dose the girl cry in the distance when her life is unfair full of no heart. she looks up and says to god if you love me answer this why is the the world torn a part and why dose it have no heart. an angel appears next to her and says the world still has a heart it's just now what was the end is now just a new start, so don't worry and don't shed no more tears I'll take you to heaven and we'll answer your questions there. she looks and the angel with a look in her eye and says never mind now I'll find out for myself, but answer this, will the end be near my life time? the angel looks and her and says yes but, just remember how are you living your dash?
2007-03-14 11:59:34 · 6 answers · asked by ? 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
it has a great meaning and dont pay any attention to those other kids...they have no love for poetry...poetry doesnt always have to rhyme just like i was explaining to my brother earlier today! honey...the poem is awesome...you can be a great poet if you want to...
2007-03-14 12:55:15 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It does have a lot of grammatical errors, but I liked the message. Also it should probably be in stanzas and there should be a comma or period at the end of each line.
2007-03-14 19:14:39 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It has horrible grammer, so I really don't like it. However, the content is good.
2007-03-14 19:07:14 · answer #3 · answered by Chronon 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what kind of poem is it?
2007-03-14 19:07:18 · answer #4 · answered by hotprincessgirl4 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not good
2007-03-14 19:07:38 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummmmmmmm.....ok
2007-03-14 19:07:37 · answer #6 · answered by Candy_Girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋