What would you rate my poem?

Question

1-10
1 being the worse and 10 being the best






Drip, drip, drip,
The rain falls,
As well as my tears,
The pain is worse than a busted lip.
No amount of shopping at the malls,
Can heal my aches and my fears,
You are my one and only,
No doubt about that,
Never thought that my love would be so painful,
You insult me constantly and call me fat,
Yet you claim that you love me,
I have been blinded so long but not I see,
This isn’t love, I have decided to leave you,
I have done nothing to deserve your abuse,
I have only been true,
But I will not live like this anymore,
That is why I am leaving you.

Just so you all know, I am not in an abusive relationship, honestly I have never even been in a relationship. I am 16 almost 17 so I am still pretty young. I have a grasp on life, and I wrote this because I have seen so many women who were in abusive relationships and they couldn't get out, I feel for women like this that feel like they are worthless, no man is worth it, especially if he takes away your free will and ability to stand up for yourself.

Just thought I should explain a little more.

So is this feeling real?
Yes and No
No this hasn't happend to me,
but this is how so many women feel,
so Yes this feeling does belong to someone. But this was completely my own work, no one elses.

Answer 1

I'll give it a solid 9 ,Great feeling,you must have seen abuse,and you definitly need to stay with writing poetry,you have the feeling and touch for it.

Answer 2

A solid 8

Answer 3

wow!
id give u an 8.5.
101% being truthful
great job expressing ur feelings
i can feel ur pain
im not kidding
ttly serious
love it
depressing
??
really did all this mean something reaL?

Answer 4

I would give it an 9 for honesty and realism.

Answer 5

I'd give it an 8 you did a pretty good job!!
♥

Answer 6

-10 it sucks

Answer 7

I do like it.Smile, o.k?