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Question

I look at the blue sky,the heavens above.
I pray to the lord that he show me some love.
I know he's with me, but sometimes I feel so alone.
I push forward cause I know one day he'll take me home.
It's like I take 4 steps forward, and 8 steps back.
I struggle,and struggle,but I can't seem to get my life on track.
so used to the hustle,and the thug life,now I'm trying to do this 9 to 5.
It gets hard because my defenses are up, and I still think I have to be slick to survive.
am I victim of the streets? just another minority that life beats?
I'm trying to be better than that,but it's not as easy as pulling a rabbit out of a hat.
I try so hard, I make progress, then life pulls the card.
But I know when I wake up that it will be a struggle today, so I take precautions, and hit my knees to pray.

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Answer 1

Now that's what I'm talking about. Life's experience with a light at the end of the tunnel. Nobody said the road would be easy, but you've come to far to turn back now, and God didn't bring you this far to leave you. Keep on pressing in, keep on hitting your knees, and keep on praying. It will be worth it in the end when God brings you out of the tunnel and the light is shining full force on your life. God's promises DO NOT come back void. Believe by Faith, and fight the good fight. And remember "This too shall pass".

Good poem. I really like it.

Answer 2

This is very good.Keep on praying and GOD will show you the way. We as GODS children have good things coming to us,but we have to keep the faith and fight. Jesus who died for us want to know no matter what we go through on earth we love Jesus.Your blessing will come through in the mean time get in a church read the bible,and it should take away you feeling like you've struggling all the time. wait on the Lord and you'll weep the best rewards from GOD!

Answer 3

Thats awesome.Remember it's all worth it when we see the lords face.

Answer 4

very good