check the grammar plez ( about presentation )?

Question

check the sentece structure and tense. thx.

We all thought that Gore did really make a good presentation. Gore was well-prepared. He offered the audience a lot of statistics, pictures, and even attracting animations about the natural disasters. Besides, Gore was very confident, he was not afraid of delivering a speech in front of many people; instead, he used the body language, facial expressions, eye contact, and most of all, a sense of humor to interact with the audience.

Answer 1

We all thought that Gore really did a good presentation; he was well prepared. He offered the audience a lot of statistics, pictures, and even had attractive animations about the natural disasters. Gore was very confident; he was not afraid of delivering a speech in front of a large audience. He cleverly used body language, facial expressions, eye contact, and most important of all, a sense of humor to interact with the audience and made a very excellant presentation.

If course, I wouldn't guarantee this to be 100% correct. -_-;

All the best!

Answer 2

We all thought Gore made a really good presentation. Gore was well-prepared. He offered the audience a lot of statistics, pictures, and even attractive animations about the natural disasters. Gore was very confident and was not afraid of delivering a speech in front of many people. He used the body language, facial expressions, eye contact, and most of all, a sense of humor to interact with the audience.

Answer 3

I would leave out the word "besides" Attracting should be attractive, also I would call him former vice-president Gore at least once. Who are the "We" that is in the first sentence?
I also would not say he was not afraid, instead say "Mr. Gore appeared confident and presented the material to his audience in a masterful way. He employed eye contact, humor and body language to get his points across to the audience"