Maya’s parents were not the only ones who influenced her life, her older brother, Bailey Jr., also did.
2007-03-13 19:28:34 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
fix this sentence, make it sound better
2007-03-13 19:32:00 · update #1
Fix what? What's the question?
2007-03-13 19:30:47 · answer #1 · answered by Speedy 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Maya's parents were not the only ones who influenced her life; her older brother, Bailey Jr., did too.
A few answers are presented here. Pick the best for the context the sentence is in.
2007-03-14 02:38:11 · answer #2 · answered by da_other_guy2003 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maya's older brother, Bailey Jr, as well as her parents, influenced her life.
2007-03-14 02:36:40 · answer #3 · answered by chellek 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Maya's parents and her older brother, Bailey Jr., influenced her life.
2007-03-14 02:34:47 · answer #4 · answered by RaNi 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's better this way:
Aside from Maya's parents, her elder brother Bailey, Jr. also influenced her life.
OR this:
Maya's parents and her elder brother, Bailey, Jr., influenced her life.
2007-03-14 02:35:23 · answer #5 · answered by SHEMH 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Maya's parents .............her life; her older brother, Bailey Jr., also exerted some influence.
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2007-03-14 02:39:45 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2007-03-14 02:32:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋