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I want to transfer to Rice because I think Rice can help better in reaching my potential than Trinity. Rice has a better educational environment and more rigorous academic discipline, for Rice is filled with vibrant students who are serious about education. Thus, I want to be part of that student body. My other reason for wanting to transfer to Rice is that Rice is close to home, since being away from my family has always been really difficult for me.

thanks!

2007-03-13 19:03:23 · 5 answers · asked by Deesa 2 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

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I want to get transfered to Rice because I think it can help better in reaching my potential than Trinity, as it has a better educational environment and more rigorous academic discipline filled with vibrant students who are serious about education.

Thus, I want to be part of that student body. Another reason for a to transfer to Rice is that it is close to home, and it has been difficult being away from my family.

2007-03-13 19:13:42 · answer #1 · answered by faiza_t 3 · 1 0

I want to transfer to Rice because I think Rice can help me better to reach my full potential than Trinity. Rice has a better educational environment and a more rigorous academic discipline. Rice is filled with vibrant students who are serious about education. Thus, I want to be part of that student body. My other reason for wanting to transfer to Rice is that Rice is closer to home, being away from my family has always been really difficult for me.

2007-03-13 19:23:32 · answer #2 · answered by doctor_buchan 2 · 0 0

I want to transfer to Rice because I think Rice will help me better than my previous college in reaching my potential. Rice, I feel, has a better educational enviroment and a more rigorous academic discipline which is filled with students who are serious about education and thus I want to be a part of that student body.

My other reason for transfering to Rice is because Rice is closer to my home. I come from a close family and it is difficult for me to be away from them.

2007-03-13 19:26:01 · answer #3 · answered by ambr95012 4 · 0 0

I would say try some pronouns on for size. After the first time you say "Rice", the reader knows what you are talking about. After the first one, turn all the other instances of "Rice" into "it".

EDIT: Except the second to last one.

2007-03-13 19:07:47 · answer #4 · answered by The Lobe 5 · 0 0

Rice, Rice, Baby!

2007-03-13 19:08:34 · answer #5 · answered by GoingNoWhereFast 5 · 0 1

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