Ok, here's what I got:
Aika, Cho, Dea, and Takama were just four normal teenagers until one day a portal opened and sucked them into a diffrent world.
Uh, that's all I got. Please help.
2007-03-13 15:09:22 · 10 answers · asked by Echo♠ 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
They went back in time, but in Aika's back-pack was her Dell Notebook. They were surrounded by Roman soldiers. Aika and Cho were all agasp. Dea asked what were they going to do. Takama reached into the back-pack to see what they could use. She pulled out a cell phone and showed the soldiers their magical trinket. Takama pulled out the Notebook. Aika said I know what to do, I least Maybe I can figure out, something with this. YES! O YES! I can go to YAHOO ANSWERS, they will put out an advanced search for us and we will all be saved.----------
I think with everybodies input, we could write a screenplay. Right everybody?
2007-03-13 15:23:43 · answer #1 · answered by LINDA D. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay, first you need to explain the portal and its purpose. How did it get there? Create a reason for those teenagers to stumble upon it. How did they open it? Was it already open? Then, you need to create a world for them to go to. Is it another Earth, only in better or worse condition? Or, were they simply sucked into a black hole sort of portal and taken to another time? Is the world they are going to dangerous? Or wonderful? Create a crisis. Maybe they could leave at anytime, but they cant because one of their friends was taken, or disappeared or injured. Something along those lines. You need a conflict. Even something as simple as the teenagers arguing over something that splits them up. Maybe they have to hide out because their race is in slavery in this world, or they are all women and women are kept as objects of slavery. Or maybe, the people of the world they ended up on are not human. They are a slightly mutated version...mutated but not necessarily ugly. Only, these inhabitants of this world are like, mind readers, or have other sorts of higher powers. You just need to make a story outline to help you out. Figure out who the good and bad guys are, what the plot of the story is and how it will be resolved. Find a conflict or two that you can fix with some heroics or thrilling manner and you'll have an awesome story. Good luck
2007-03-13 15:28:38 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
first before u plan ur story u have to decide what type of audience it will be intended towards :/ it its for kids then go ahead and add super powers and cheesy things like "oh yeah captian flame ill defeat u with this bazooka 3000 " , if its for like teenagers " like the type of people who watch anime " then make it a little more serious and not too much about random super powers but more on story and entertainment , and add plot twists ,and add things teenagers can relate too. if its more for adults then avoid the portal and try not to focus too much on making the characters young and hip focus mainly on interesting story, fights that make sense and are kewl and bloody , and plot twists .
2007-03-16 17:19:25 · answer #3 · answered by Mark 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They landed in a different dimension only to find themselfs held captive by an evil Queen of a strange land. They must rise up to help the people of this strange land and try to find there way back home. Strange thing happen like them meeting bigfoots and leprechuans and other mythological creatures like dragons and griffons.
If you wand more help contact me and we can come up with something together. Hope i can help.
2007-03-13 15:34:21 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ooooo!!!! The could of go sucked into a world of VAMPIRES!!!! And they have to fight to stay alive or end up sucked dry!!!!!!!
Or they could end up in a land that is backwards from there world!!!!!! like for example say they are evil in this world and they have to fight to stay good. And if they don't they corrupt the world and create hell on earth!!!!
These are just ideas of course.
Good luck!
2007-03-13 15:19:44 · answer #5 · answered by billiejoe_2005 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
...you see, their lives at their neighborhood were coming pretty weird. people were missing, houses abandoned overnight, lights coming on and off. it seems that they're only the only people.
so, going back, the world there was very much the same, except everybody didn't know them. their friends are like aliens.
even they are forgetting one another..
lol i'm only 12
2007-03-13 15:27:57 · answer #6 · answered by DoubleDigit 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
...and then they woke up only to find themselves in another world and each one of them has got some superpowers and their mission is to save the world they were in right now being threatened by a Slimy Monster...
2007-03-13 15:14:22 · answer #7 · answered by tagadaine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
they were sucked into a world full of hentai chicks. That world has never seen boys before thus starts a hilarious and quite horny adventure!
2007-03-13 15:14:30 · answer #8 · answered by Nanook~Maybe I need a longer Name?~ 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Dana...that's funny...but I'll to to add more
The "world" was one where teenagers made their own rules ..see where that takes you...
2007-03-13 15:16:25 · answer #9 · answered by EvelynMine 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
then they came back the end!
2007-03-13 15:11:53 · answer #10 · answered by dani 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋