Basically, I need to make these two pieces stronger (vocabulary wise) and concise (no wordiness). Any other suggestions are welcome too. Please help me & thanks so muchhhh in advance!
Research Proposal
As a society, we are bound by the belief that love is one of the most sacred life forces. In fact, the relationship between the opposite sexes is based on appearance, attraction, fertility, and erotic love. I plan to prove that love was not only a beautiful aspect of life but also a dark aspect; causing deception, disrespect, and danger to early Greeks. I will research the myths of Aphrodite and analyze her behaviors to evaluate both sides of love; the beautiful and the dark side.
My Working Thesis
Early Greeks believed that love had limitations to its beauty and that beyond those limits, the emotion became dark, dangerous, and dreadful. For them, love was “two-faced”, being a necessity in life but also a danger.
2007-03-13 14:10:20 · 1 answers · asked by Lina 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
In most University essays you need to write in third person. I think this appllies to proposals as well.
Thesis, How about?
Early Greeks believed that love had limitations in its beauty and beyond those limits, emotion became dark dangerous and depressing. For the Greeks love was "two-faced," being a necessity in life, but also a danger.
2007-03-13 15:59:40 · answer #1 · answered by lone-wolf 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋