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I made that dedicated to a girl. I drew everything, except for the photos. :)

Comments and suggestions would be totally appreciated!

2007-03-13 13:41:21 · 6 answers · asked by TheChronos 2 in Entertainment & Music Comics & Animation

6 answers

Too many bland photos of you and her. And they interrupt the animation, which is all drawn. It seems out of place.

Also, in the beginning, you "act out" the lyrics with the drawings.
"lying here with you" -- it shows him lying with her
"listening to the rain" -- it shows him listening to rain
"smiling just to see" -- He smiles
"the smile upon your face" -- a photo of her smiling.

A music video should never do that. You should interpret the lyrics yourself and have your own ideas for the images; not just follow the lyrics like a script.

2007-03-13 14:25:15 · answer #1 · answered by D L 3 · 1 1

sorry i thought the music was kind of dopey.... and if you could inclued a few more diffrent drawings too....

2007-03-13 20:54:38 · answer #2 · answered by malgosia 3 · 0 0

Very nice hope you are happy!

2007-03-14 11:45:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

It's so sweet!! I love it. I hope you make more for her. She must be really happy. =^_^=

2007-03-13 20:48:23 · answer #4 · answered by Hinata 4 · 1 0

I liked it = )

2007-03-13 20:50:47 · answer #5 · answered by DonniedAMN 3 · 0 1

That was excellent!!!!

2007-03-13 20:53:13 · answer #6 · answered by Sherry K 2 · 0 0

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