itis my view for love:-
love is an emotion, it's a joy;
it's a devotion,who'll not enjoy.
love has no age,it has no control;
if u love love someone,don't conceal tell with soul.
For some it's an attraction,for some a game;
but for a lover it is a selection,of most beautiful pain.
love is an art,which gives freedom;
it is a creation of heart having peace as its kingdom.
love is a music tone which kills cruelty;
it can melt a hardstone and shows its hidden beauty.
love is deeper than a sky or ocean;
it can fill even a stone with emotion.
Everyone says that everything is fair in love and war;
but I says that there should be only love and war.
Love is precious than a diamond stone;
it has a message of peace with beautiful tone..
(I hope u will like it.)
2007-03-13 03:46:01 · 20 answers · asked by Paddy.da.heartwinner 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
hi
i most congratulate! u for rghting such a beutiful poem........... u hav pen down such beatuful words ............. it's amzing nd gr8.......... u hav seriously pen down ur emotions nd ur views nd ur feelings on love.........i feel this is d meaning of love in true sense.......... atleast i hav become the fan of ur poetry...............
way 2 go buddy............. all the best................ and , keep writting more beutiful poems like this nd plz atleast give m a chance for once to read them...............
2007-03-13 04:14:06 · answer #1 · answered by anika 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My Dear Friend your poem is from the heart and it holds a special place to anyone that can feel your words from the heart as I read it .......Keep up the good work and keep a journal of your poems and submit them to a publisher .
Happy Writing and be sure to write about a
Mothers Love for a child gone too soon....
Best Of luck
...mom of adam 10-02-86 03-14-06
2007-03-13 03:58:24 · answer #2 · answered by jbw_7 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful
2007-03-13 04:46:32 · answer #3 · answered by ananthramtejas 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Shabash!
Waise emotions insaan ke apne ander hote hain or jab aapke emotions khudba khud in the form of words rawani se chalne lagte hain to wo poetry hoti hai.N u have done well,seems u know the wonders of love. its v true ke dunya main love or war k alawa kuch nahin hai
2007-03-13 04:14:07 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
With a little fine tuning here and there to make it more realistic you will do allright.
Think it over
" ...... there should be only love and war"
better something like this
''''''''''''' there should only be love mere yar "
2007-03-13 05:31:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
good one
yaar
hope u follow it in your life too
take care
2007-03-13 04:47:15 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it!! I love Love!! have a great day!
2007-03-13 03:55:53 · answer #7 · answered by aprilmayy@sbcglobal.net 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really boring and the way you wrote it is hard to follow.
2007-03-13 04:52:12 · answer #8 · answered by Raquel S 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not bad...keep writing ull get better with it..
even publish.. later
2007-03-13 03:50:19 · answer #9 · answered by Diva 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. =0) ^^
2007-03-13 04:02:03 · answer #10 · answered by RED ROSE 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋