Spinning in my highest heels
This was the best of
This was the best of
My lively years
Twirling in my happy dance
I solemnly gazed
into the shadows
of my lovely past
Isn't it grand?
Isn't it great?
Wasn't it meant to be?
Oh, what it could've been?
Life is like a box
Of greatest joys
And secret grins
Where the charm continues
Again
Isn't it grand?
To be alive
Again
In this hot June day
In a sunflower bed?
I can sing,
Sing along with me
Its a time to dance
With your lively self
Again
Sing again
Like your wings been
Free
2007-03-12 18:45:52 · 6 answers · asked by ibid 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
a 3. it needs a lot of work.
peace
2007-03-12 18:49:27 · answer #1 · answered by Shadow Lark 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your poem pretty well. From the scale of reaching 1-10 I believe it was an 8. Good luck with the poems.
2007-03-12 18:54:00 · answer #2 · answered by chatty girl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a 6.
2007-03-12 18:48:20 · answer #3 · answered by RANDELL 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really good. Now do one for middle age folks!
2007-03-12 18:50:06 · answer #4 · answered by freekin 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it, nicely put
2007-03-12 18:51:47 · answer #5 · answered by cekret77 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
God Lord...that's beautiful !!!
2007-03-12 18:49:33 · answer #6 · answered by EvelynMine 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋