I'd like to be
The kind of dream you'd never share
To be your boss and to be your maid
Your shaving cream, your razor blade
The buttons of your shirt
Your favourite underwear
Hey you
Makin' an offer that
No one would dare to refuse
Don't play the adamant
Don't be so arrogant
Let me in
Let me be your muse tonight
I'd like to be
The first white hair upon your head
To be your cherry pie
Your daily bread
I'll cook for free
I'll make your bed
If I can know the things you've thought and never said
I'd like to be the owner of the zipper on your jeans
And that thing that makes you happy
I'd like to be the beginning, the end
And the inbetween
And be your slave
And be your Queen
Hey you
Makin' an offer that
No one could ever refuse
Don't play the adamant
Don't be so arrogant
Can't you see I've fallen for ya?
2007-03-12 12:55:04 · 28 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Yes I am quite happy, thank you shane.
2007-03-12 12:57:30 · update #1
I'm a girl.
2007-03-12 13:03:09 · update #2
Awww Thanks !!
Are you available for marriage?
2007-03-12 13:11:38 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
existence should not be a adventure to the grave with the purpose of arriving effectively in an beautiful and properly preserved physique, yet particularly to skid in sideways - Chardonnay in a single hand - chocolate in the different - physique thoroughly used up, completely wiped out and screaming * "WOO HOO, What a trip"
2016-11-24 23:22:01 · answer #2 · answered by ecker 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow...really nice. I like it all..maybe the last word 'ya' didn't seem to fit the rest of the prose. Maybe it could be changed to..
"Can't you see that I've fallen?"
I think the 'you' could be implied. Just an idea... Still nice one, though!
2007-03-12 12:58:53 · answer #3 · answered by merlin_steele 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yeehaw babee yowza yiyi yieee. Actually that is very good. It made me think and I dont normally do that. Very nice.
2007-03-12 13:01:18 · answer #4 · answered by timmy h 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hey, its a cute poem...very funny too. You must have had some good inspirtation for that...some special girl maybe?
2007-03-12 12:59:24 · answer #5 · answered by The BecaNATOR 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Cool!
2007-03-12 13:00:38 · answer #6 · answered by •♦๑•TxRose•♦๑• 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem. I liked it very much. Peace!
2007-03-12 12:58:11 · answer #7 · answered by Drivliam 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice.
2007-03-12 12:59:22 · answer #8 · answered by Don't Follow Anyone 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you should had said hay girls then say your words, because guys will call you a gay and a fa/
2007-03-12 13:01:37 · answer #9 · answered by i,m here if you need to talk. 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i seen it
i read it
and omfg
way too long to read
YOU LOST ME
2007-03-12 12:58:07 · answer #10 · answered by hazel2nuts 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is waaayyy too long to read.
2007-03-12 12:59:39 · answer #11 · answered by Lauren 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋