i tend to repeat myself in an attempt to get a visual point across to my readers. how can i say more w/less?

Answer 1

Try to be more articulate with your writing. Too many authors overemphasize their work by rehashing something already addressed.

But sometimes, there can be circumstances where 'reflection' is just part of the storyline--particularly when it is being used to advance the plot.

Answer 2

Isolate portions of the visual and concentrate on them one at a time. For example, if describing a person, start with the head, and describe it in full. Move downward, one area at a time. As though the reader were allowing their eyes to drift downward, assessing the person.

Answer 3

How about you post a sample of this problem and I'll try and help the best I can.
I've taken a crack at writing and have read several books on the subject and could possibly give an amateur-ish opinion.

Answer 4

One word - Edit.

After you write your piece, edit it and take out the repetetive parts.