If this doesn't touch u.....you're heartless
One night a guy & a girl were
driving home from the movies. The
boy sensed there was
something wrong because of the painful
silence they shared between them
that night. The girl then asked the boy to pull over
because she wanted to talk. She told him that her
feelings had changed & that it was time to move on.
A silent tear slid down his cheek as he
slowly reached into his pocket & passed her a folded note.
At that moment, a drunk driver was speeding down
that very same street. He swerved
right into the drivers seat, killing the boy.
Miraculously, the girl survived. Remembering the note, she
pulled it out & read it.
"Without your love, I would die."
2007-03-12 11:27:37 · 20 answers · asked by [SuZaNnA]™ 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
well written
2007-03-12 11:29:50 · answer #1 · answered by Mag 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is very touching. However, it gives the impression that the girl was responsible for his death. Thinking about the long term and the consequences if this situation were real, I can't help but feel that the girl would feel terrible guilt about this boy's death. It made me think of those emails you receive were there is a heartwrenching story and at the ends it states, "send this to __ people or the same will happen to you". Otherwise it's a touching story.
2007-03-12 11:34:49 · answer #2 · answered by skankwear 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
one where did you get an idea to right a poem like this and 2 that is very tradgick but i have no feelings for it because it is a poem it is a good poem and if it is real i am sorry if that is your loss
2007-03-12 11:32:15 · answer #3 · answered by alex h 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very beautiful
(should most likely be half sung, half read with husky woman's baritone cabaret voice, and iron hooter tubes electronica slightly sprinkled with telephone pole-like reverb in the background, and it would make an amazing hit CD single.)
2007-03-13 02:36:07 · answer #4 · answered by sam_alot 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That touched me in a way I've never been touched before.. I'm suing for sexual harassment.
No but seriously, I really liked that *copies and pastes it somewhere*
2007-03-12 11:32:08 · answer #5 · answered by Life Is Illusive 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the meaning of it but I would change it so it is less of a story and has a bit more flow.
2007-03-12 11:30:57 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice. It's like Romeo and Juliet. I love it. Nice sentence structure etc.
2007-03-12 11:31:50 · answer #7 · answered by DARIA. - JOINED MAY 2006 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I saw this before. It was on myspace. Its very nice and all but very sad. It made me second read it.
2007-03-13 10:08:18 · answer #8 · answered by Mimi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Whoa! that was touching! prophecy fulfilled in a sad way.
2007-03-12 11:33:09 · answer #9 · answered by Clueless??? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good
2007-03-12 14:58:46 · answer #10 · answered by Time@ Time 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh, that was sooo sweet, but nice job, this was so sad, but really good..i would give it 9 out of 10..:)
2007-03-12 11:30:58 · answer #11 · answered by MEOW 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋