Can someone write a poem for me?

Question

I have to write a poem for English class. It has to be a love poem and I want it to be about this crush that I have on this guy. I know some people say they couldnt do it because they dont know how i feel but if you listen to or read the lyrics to TEARDROPS ON MY GUITAR, you'll know how i feel about this guy. I'd also like to include in their somehow that i have had a crush on him for almost two years, i have never talked to him and i am scared to tell him i like him and i need to get over him because he will never like me....

Im not being lazy at all. I have spent hours every day for two weeks trying to write this poem. I just cant come up with one, I suck at writing poems.

It does have to rhyme and it has to be at least 10 lines. I am 18 he is almost 17. I love everything, his blue eyes, his smile, his voice, the fact that he has that skater punk style and he is a screamer vocalist in a band, his personality.

Answer 1

sure i can write you a poem

Answer 2

HEres th lyrics to Teardrops On My Guitar for anyone else trying to write a poem. Poem is at the bottom.


Teardrops On My Guitar

Drew looks at me
I fake a smile so he won't see
What I want and I need
And everything that we should be

I'll bet she's beautiful
That girl he talks about
And she's got everything
That I have to live without

Drew talks to me
I laugh, cause it's so damn funny
That I can't even see
Anyone, when he's with me

He says he's so in love
He's finally got it right
I wonder if he knows
He's all I think about at night

He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar
The only thing that keeps me wishing on a wishing star
He's the song in the car I keep singing
Don't know why I do

Drew walks by me
Can he tell that I cant breathe
And there he goes, so perfectly
The kind of flawless I wish I could be

She better hold him tight
Give him all her love
Look in those beautiful eyes
And know she's lucky, cause

He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar
The only thing that keeps me wishing on a wishing star
He's the song in the car I keep singing
Don't know why I do

So I drive home alone
As I turn out the light
I'll put his picture down
And maybe get some sleep tonight

He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar
The only one who's got enough of me to break my heart
He's the song in the car I keep singing
Don't know why I do

He's the time taken up
But there's never enough
And he's all that I need to fall into

Drew looks at me
I fake a smile so he won't see


Over the Years people come and go,
but i stand watching you wishing you could know.
That everytime you brush me in the hallway,
I thank god for giving me this day.
Yet still i sit back and i let you walk by
and when you talk about her, inside i die
I keep on waiting for the day when
You have that look for me instead.
But still if you asked me
my true feelings
i would lose my nerve
and miss what i deserve.
so next time you walk by
look into my eye
and you can watch me die.

Answer 3

One of the easiest poems to write (and maybe it may serve as an exercise as well) is a simple Haiku... which is a poem with 17 syllables:

"Thinking of your kiss,
the magic in your caress
and your smiling eyes."

One of the stumbling blocks in writing is the mistaken belief where something needs to be perfect for publishing the moment you put pen to paper. I would suggest writing everything and anything that comes to mind at first when you consider your poem, then sift through all the little bits you jotted down and maybe piece several together. Then re-write them to flow better like the way you imagine it, and keep re-writing it until you're satisfied.

But before you write anything about unrequitted love, you should probably talk to him (not about anything special, just casual conversation to see if you'd even like to take it further or even like the guy). If he doesn't feel the same way, his loss.

Answer 4

I love everything,
his blue eyes, his smile,
his voice,
the fact that he has that skater punk style

There's your first four lines and you wrote them yourself. Now pull yourself together and write six more.

You can get a lot of mileage out of tears and years and all the words that rhyme with teen. You can do this. It may not be great art but it will be your own work and that's worth a lot.

Answer 5

Be creative, write the poem yourself. You know you can get in trouble for plagarism.

Oh and by the way, if you live in the state of california and you are caught with that boy doing anything the least remotely intimate you can go to jail for statutory rape because technically you're an adult and he's still a minor.

Answer 6

Take some of the time you spend begging on the internet and just write the poem already, for God's sake!

Answer 7

Roses are red (KEEP READING)
Violets are blue
I have multiple personalities
And so do I
You may not love me
The way that I, you
Yet for so long now
I wanted to try
To convince you to speak to us
To make you see
That we're a wonderful person
Both me and me
It's been two years now
That we've felt this way
We talked and we've listened
And I think we must say
That if not for me convincing me
To write these words down
We'd never have met you
And you never would have found
That we're full of love to give
Full of generosity
And you'd have missed out on
Loving me and me

(BTW - I hold rights to this, I'm just sharing if you'd like to use it!)

Answer 8

If this is supposed to be written by you, then you need to write it. but if you need any kind of inspiration check out www.testriffic.com ,its a creators comunity, You will never know he will/will not like you untill you tell him. I never thought a sk8er guy would care so much about me, but my bf does. If you still need help email me, I'd be glad to help. just don't copy someone's poem and claim it as your own, thats called plagerism. ~neko-chan~

Answer 9

Within this veil of toil and sin
Your head grows bald
But not your chin.
-Burma Shave

Answer 10

We need more information. Does it have to rhyme? have a certain meter? Be any length? How old are the two of you? What do you love about him?

Answer 11

Roses are red violets are blue sugars are sweet but nothing much sweeter than you