i have just written a poem for school ... can you help me find a name for it please =D
here it is :
I am the girl with glasses.
Overweight and underachieved,
Unpopular and unappreciated,
Who doesn’t get asked to the dance.
I am the boy who is poor.
Skinny and unknown,
Cautious and scared,
Who sees fake smiles every day.
I am the loser, nerd, geek, dork or teachers pet.
I am bullied.
Please dont say bullied...i do not want to call this poem bullied because i have already called a poem of mine bullied ... please help me =D
2007-03-12 08:00:42 · 12 answers · asked by ♥Asнℓєу ρ♥ 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
How about calling this poem "Lonely" ?
2007-03-12 08:11:48 · answer #1 · answered by yarbar04 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Real World
Sick of Stereotyped
Overlooked
Tears Behind the Mask
Everyday Cruelty
The Sad Inside
Hope that helps! (Nice poem by the way, we can all really relate)
2007-03-12 10:53:45 · answer #2 · answered by squirrelgirl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Like yer poem, here's a couple ideas:
Seeds of Discontent
The Sapling
The Last Dove
Falling from the Bridge
Running Home
Good luck =)
2007-03-12 09:05:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-02 00:16:56 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Alone." Or maybe "I am," because you repeat that in each stanza (parallelism) to stress that phrase. Or you could leave it "Untitled." But before you give it a title, I would recommend adding an apostrophe before the s in teacher's, and maybe say "I am the loser, nerd, geek, dork, and teacher's pet" instead of or. Or makes it seem kind of passive. But you don't have to listen to me.
Hope this helps!
2007-03-12 08:34:20 · answer #5 · answered by windchimes335 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Something along the lines of: "A poem from the playground."
2007-03-12 11:42:00 · answer #6 · answered by Bill 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Unaccepted or
Unappreciated
2007-03-12 08:31:06 · answer #7 · answered by candy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
call the poem I AM if u have anymore em me at liz_hart_9530@yahoo.com
2007-03-12 08:09:52 · answer #8 · answered by crazykid9530 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The real me...
2007-03-12 08:17:35 · answer #9 · answered by intense_red_lily 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"they" dont know me
2007-03-12 08:06:36 · answer #10 · answered by Dak B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋