I am not a Man of suits and ties,I'm a little rough around the edges,
I'm a man of recent sorrows,and creeping toward lifes ledges.
If I were to jump over,and take a long tumble from grace,
Would you be there when I landed,with your concrned and loving face?
And if I crawled my way back up,to attempt this once again,
Would your reaction be to refrain me,like a true and loyal friend?
Would you wrap your sweet arms around me and pray for me to heal,
And never take them from me,just to prove your love is real?
2007-03-12 07:32:45 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That is a beautiful poem. I actually read it out loud and my son liked it too. (cause it rhymed)good job. You have a real talent.
2007-03-12 07:49:23 · answer #1 · answered by laceywat1 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My father replaced right into a German-Jew. He died while i replaced into 2. regardless of the indisputable fact that I lacked his presence in my existence his inheritance entailed my reading for some years the Holocaust. And jointly as we are conscious the atrocities many are blind to the countless ingenious and inventive works of genius inspired by way of such an unbelievably gruesome financial ruin of historic previous. i come across it rather mind-blowing that such 'attractiveness' can sing from the human soul inspired by way of such ugliness. I plan on following your lead and intend to study greater of those poems. And might recommend you study Elie Wiesel's evening, a singular based upon his stories as a sufferer-- and a survivor--and the doubt placed interior the human soul with regard to the existence of goodness or God while fact and morality have been stripped away: "while evening snow encases the sunlight."
2016-10-02 00:15:42 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2007-03-12 07:42:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love it. You never cease to amaze me.
2007-03-12 15:48:40 · answer #4 · answered by ♥ Zoey ♥ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes
2007-03-12 07:39:58 · answer #5 · answered by AVATARD 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Compelling stuff!
2007-03-12 07:36:38 · answer #6 · answered by NicOOd 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awesome Fat boy
Bring us some more
2007-03-12 16:25:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awww.. fatboy that was beautiful!
((*wrapping my arms around you*))
2007-03-12 08:17:27 · answer #8 · answered by Destiny 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
-that's me speechless, b/c I don't have the words to describe how great that was!♥
2007-03-12 07:37:11 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Fatboyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, who knew????????
2007-03-12 07:37:45 · answer #10 · answered by ♠ Merlin ♠ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋