What do U think of this song please...?

Question

Really gonna miss you, it's really gonna be different without you
time is gonna be hard & slow, for the rest of my life, I'm gonna be thinkin about you, yes I am, time came when you had to go, I'll miss you my buddy, I'll miss you my friends, I promise my love for you will never end, in you're finest hour I was there with you & without you things won't be the same, but there's a higher power that we answer to & you heard him callin your name, really gonna miss you, everything about you, your smiling face, yes, i know you want us all to be strong, really gonna miss you, I know you've gone to that magic place, singin you a brand new song, I'll miss you my buddy, I'll miss you my friend, I promise my love for you will never end..............really gonna miss you......

Answer 1

I like it. It's quite an emotional song. I've gone through loss and it brought tears to my eyes. Good job!

Answer 2

Very sweet and sincere. I like it a lot but the "buddy" kinda sobered it up for me too much. Makes it sound like you're talking to a Jack Russell Terrier puppy or something.

Answer 3

I think dey r gud lyriks might b a bit 2 short wel u can just repeat more....u should split da song up into verses and a chorus....denda lyriks r gud bt i guess i cant judge da song wit out hearing da melody so its hard to say if its gud cause da melody is important

Answer 4

The phrase "really gonna miss you". Is a bit annoying but a good job nevertheless.

Answer 5

the song is hot when u are opening up to a very special person in ur life and to let them know how much u will miss them if they are gone

Answer 6

i like it, except the word buddy, the rest is really good..

Answer 7

I like it.

Answer 8

not bad/