can some one correct any ohter errors in this i missed?

Question

For many years Americans have been going to movie theaters for a one of a kind experience. The venue, the company, the good o' popcorn and a soda, but among these things the actual movie it self. One of the better known genres of movies is horror. A individual might ask why horror films? Because it stimulates the viewers interest in a new and different way. This type of film specifically stimulates fear, fear of ones com rads, of where one lives, of ones country, and even of ones self. Movie goers in America have chosen to see horror films for the pure fact of curiosity. Monsters, psychos, and mutated being of the beyond all leave viewers horrified but coming back for more. American viewers throughout history have been influenced by horror films and even influenced horror films through their actions, and words. The human mind always seems to wander, wondering what if such a thing could happen. Through jealousy, anger, and bitterness of the past the people make the villains, if and only when they do in fact go insane. Americans are attracted to the insane,and unlikely cases, people are attracted to what they fear.

Answer 1

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For many years Americans have been going to movie theaters for a one of a kind [one-of-a-kind, compound ajectives should be hyphenated] experience. The venue, the company, the good o'[ol' - the contracted form of 'old'] popcorn and a soda, but among [soda. Among.. - two separate ideas require two sentances, it also makes it easier for the reader to follow] these things the actual movie it self [itself is one word]. One of the better known genres of movies is horror. A individual might ask[,] why horror films? Because['because' is unneeded] it stimulates the viewers[viewer's] interest in a new and different way. This type of film specifically stimulates fear, fear of ones [one's] com rads [comrades], of where one lives, of ones [one's]country, and even of ones [one's] self. Movie[-]goers in America have chosen to see horror films for the pure fact of curiosity. Monsters, psychos, and [the] mutated being of the beyond all leave viewers horrified but coming back for more. American viewers throughout history have been influenced by horror films and even influenced horror films through their actions, [no comma needed]and words. The human mind always seems to wander, wondering what if such a thing could happen. Through jealousy, anger, and bitterness of the past the people make the villains, if and only when they do in fact go insane. Americans are attracted to the insane,and unlikely cases,[;] people are attracted to what they fear.

Answer 2

For many years, Americans have been going to movie theaters for a one of a kind experience. The venue, the company, the good ol' popcorn and a soda, but among these things, the actual movie itself. One of the better-known genres of movies is horror. An individual might ask, "why horror films?" Because it stimulates the viewers interest in a new and different way.

This type of film specifically stimulates fear, fear of ones comrades, of where one lives, of ones country, and even of ones self. Moviegoers in America have chosen to see horror films for the pure fact of curiosity. Monsters, psychos, and mutated beings of the beyond all leave viewers horrified but coming back for more.

American viewers throughout history have been influenced by horror films and even influenced horror films through their actions, and words. The human mind always seems to wander, wondering what if such a thing could happen. Through jealousy, anger, and bitterness of the past the people make the villains, if and only when they do in fact go insane. Americans are attracted to the insane, and unlikely cases, people are attracted to what they fear

Answer 3

Are horror movies often not exploration of the fears of our subconscious? Is Stephen King not, in fact, peddling bogey men from our childhood? Interestingly, also, people other than Americans also go to movie theatres, or cinemas. My main criticism of this piece is that you do not seem to have a main point. It might be a good idea to pick one and make sure it is made - for example: People are attracted to what they fear. That's an interesting point to discuss and you make it right at the end of your paragraph; introduce it into your discussion a little earlier and then explore the notion.

Answer 4

actualy people are not attracted to what they fear but the way the evils are presnted in the movies is attracting. The villains in films are always shooted impressively. This is what attract the viewers. Also they enjoy the victory of truth over the devil.