Would it be:
'To secure an entry-level position in the accounting and finance fields, that will allow me to expand and challenge my acquired skills and education while continuing to learn.'
or
'To secure an entry-level position in the accounting and the finance fields, that will allow me to expand and challenge my acquired skills and education while continuing to learn'?
2007-03-11 15:53:51 · 9 answers · asked by 12Grey14 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
In my opinion, the first one. Both sentences are gramartically correct, but it must be boring to say some kind of 'the' twice in one sentence.
2007-03-11 16:05:47 · answer #1 · answered by vanadiel3 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Neither. I would say, "Securing an entry-level postition in the accounting and finance fields would allow me to expand and challenge my acquired skills and education while continuing to learn."
2007-03-11 16:24:08 · answer #2 · answered by kellyschemicalromance 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"To secure an entry-level position in accounting and finance fields . . ." Leave both "the's" out.
2007-03-11 16:03:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first one.
2007-03-11 16:01:44 · answer #4 · answered by Yahoo!Advisory 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first entry.
2007-03-11 15:57:42 · answer #5 · answered by marlie6211 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
The first one flows better.
2007-03-11 18:44:39 · answer #6 · answered by serene irene 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first one. To repeat "the" again is redundant.
2007-03-11 16:03:15 · answer #7 · answered by chris 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would have to say the second one. But i honestly don't think the first one is wrong, its just grammatically correct to say the second one.
2007-03-11 15:57:47 · answer #8 · answered by sportsgirl931 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
the first, you have already said "the"
2007-03-11 15:58:06 · answer #9 · answered by Nathan H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋