Do you like the Song I wrote?

Question

Title: New Life

By: Me!
Age: 13 yrs. old

I've always thought,
That this was the road,
to find the path of life...

Figuring it out,
Sorting everything,
Just isn't working out anymore...

So I said, "Look here"
his eyes were locked,
and all I wanted to do,
Was to disappear...

Just tryin' the easy way out,
was the key to unlock the future...

Livin' life without a simple timer,
was a dream I never even thought of...

So start a new road,
Find the easy path,
And i'm sure you'll
Figure it out.

Answer 1

i love it! it's very touching to me, and i love heart felt art. it is very expressive and unique. keep it up!

Answer 2

Pretty good! My turn:

The Girls With The High IQ

Just off work, going berserk,
Wondering what the night will bring
Looking for fun with almost anyone,
Anywhere or anything!

You’ve got the loot, and spirit to boot
You want to have a good time
There is one kind of girl, you’ll find,
That’s perfect for your frame of mind!

CHORUS 1 The Girls With The High IQ
Always know what to do
For competitive action and high satisfaction
It’s The Girls With The High IQ

Girls in bars are Friday night stars
All they ever want is a drink
Girls that are “tens” own all of their friends
They don’t know or care what you think

Popular places with no social graces
Are no place for looking, for me
The best place to see them is in a museum,
Computer store or library

CHORUS 2 The Girls With The High IQ
Always know what to do
For higher learning and hot fires burning
It’s The Girls With The High IQ

BRIDGE So try Under all that control,
So shy There’s an untested soul!
So try Yeah, bookworms are fun!
So shy They really need someone

CHORUS 3 The Girls With The High IQ
Always know what to do
That wonderful wit will give you a fit
It’s The Girls With The High IQ, yeah

CHORUS 1 The Girls With The High IQ
Always know what to do
For competitive action and high satisfaction
It’s The Girls With The High IQ

Answer 3

NIce

Answer 4

for ur age, that is really good. I think there could b some minor adjustments but it is really good.

Answer 5

Pretty good kid. Bravo ;)