Love is a passion of things unbound,
A passion of self.
A passion of others,
A passion of purpose.
Love is a devine hope,
Or a curse of mortal man.
Love is a quest,
Undertaken by all.
Love is the unknown force,
A force that drives us to foolishness.
Drives us to unknown heights,
Unknown reaches of insanity.
Love can be your saviour,
Love can be your downfall.
Love can be so much,
It's your choice which is yours.
2007-03-11 11:33:06 · 17 answers · asked by Bruce L 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
This is my own work i'm gonna post more of them for comments and suggestions
2007-03-11 12:16:18 · update #1
I love that poem.....is that yours? I LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!! its totally true. write some more....i wanna read them.
2007-03-11 12:14:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
It seems a relatively clear poem until the last line which I do not agree with. If you love, especially deeply, and something goes wrong and you get hurt, you may have done all you possibly can yet you cannot choose if someone hurts you in spite of the love that you have shown. Maybe I am misreading it but I don't agree with the last line at all.
2007-03-11 11:38:48 · answer #2 · answered by JENNIFER 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
my dear friend i think you have a talent... but remember poetry is not about rhyming.. it's about the contents of the poem. And good poetry comes from the heart. And find someone to be your inspiration. That's where best poetry comes from, feelings and experiences with someone else, your inspiration.
2007-03-11 11:37:44 · answer #3 · answered by Wenke_91 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think u did a great job
i wasnt cheezy or lame
very matter-of-fact
but not very romantic either
but it works well
all u need now is a tital
like mabey "your choice" or "love is passion" or "love can be"
someting like taht
ur poem also has a nice flow to it and its not choppy
2007-03-11 11:45:28 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Its great.. except I would change the last two lines, they just seem a bit out of place.
2007-03-11 11:37:16 · answer #5 · answered by callmecouture 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
can you tell me how can love be a curse of mortal man...when it is a beautiful thing if you experience it fully....
2007-03-11 13:54:29 · answer #6 · answered by amri 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's lovely really nice
2007-03-11 11:37:00 · answer #7 · answered by Black Orchid 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Bit dull to be honest-no originality!
2007-03-11 12:06:04 · answer #8 · answered by munki 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
To think I saw this first! I'm stunned.
2007-03-11 11:37:25 · answer #9 · answered by John S 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
yer been there done that,, made them mistakes,, that is love
2007-03-11 11:39:04 · answer #10 · answered by valda54 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋