How does this objective sound to you?
OBJECTIVE
An experienced _________ who is looking for an exciting opportunity in The United States Government as a _________.
How would you touch that up or is that good enough?
2007-03-11 09:35:40 · 2 answers · asked by spjunkies 2 in Business & Finance ➔ Careers & Employment
It's for the DOJ as a Program Assistant. I'm just horrible at this type of thing because I can never seem to find the right words.
2007-03-11 09:58:11 · update #1
1) Hopefully the experienced ____ would be more developed later with the schooling and work experience track record.
2) An opportunity with the US Government is wayyyyy off because there are thousands of departments .
That makes it sound like the US Gov is one thing like Sears or General Electric.
The objective should narrow it way down . . .
The court system ? Congress ? DOD ? IRS ?
FBI ? CIA ? BATF ? etc . . .
Do a bit more homework and narrow down your employer target.
2007-03-11 09:50:30 · answer #1 · answered by kate 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's not a sentence- there is no verb or predicate. I'm not sure what you are trying to say, but I would consider rephrasing it. What is the experienced_____, who is looking for an exciting opportunity in the United States Government as a _____, doing?
2007-03-11 16:47:38 · answer #2 · answered by aeic05 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋