When love takes your hand
Time stands still for a moment,
Captured by your heart.
I wrote this one just now. You can have it.
Love slips through the door;
Softly whispers to your heart
When you're not looking.
I'll give this one to you, too, if you like it.
You should try it, too. It's super-easy, and fun, too.
2007-03-11 07:45:34
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answer #1
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answered by Bad Kitty! 7
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Happy to!
Just remember, this is an EXAMPLE - It's MY work, so for you to use it without a citation would be plagarism. But it should give you an idea how to get started.
Haiku should be three lines of 5, 7 and 5 syllalbles (in the US version) - I've attached a link with a lot of info from Wikipedia on Haiku. If you're interested in this sort of poetry, you may like the Yahoo Mountain Home group - they write a really cool kind of poetry called Waka...
You usually want to include a season somewhere in your Haiku...
Red and gold leaves fall,
Grey skies and a cold blanket
Now that you have gone.
Or...
Your love enflames me,
A bright ray of summer sun,
Endless warmth and joy.
See? Give it a shot! It doesn't need to rhyme...You're usually implying things more than you are STATING them outright...
Here's one about a different topic...
Cool, night mountain air
Deep talk a mile up the sky,
Good times and good friends.
Orion
2007-03-11 08:15:03
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answered by Orion 5
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i feel as if you should do your OWN homework.
i don't mean to sound rude, but it's just that when i had this kind of assignment, i had to write it by myself without someone i don't know writing it for me.
Oh i Wish!
but that means it's not original and who knows if the person giving you the poem just took some famous poet's poem.
Be Cautious!!
2007-03-11 07:40:53
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answer #3
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answered by xjenx3 2
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golden morning dew,
heavens a pale baby blue;
a red rose for you.
2007-03-11 09:55:39
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answered by nicole d 1
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Love is really cool
And sex is also awesome
If you are 18
2007-03-11 07:37:45
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answer #5
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answered by Anonymous
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I love you so much
You will always have my heart
'Til the day I die
2007-03-11 07:40:25
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answered by just wants to know 7
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