LOVE IS.......
LOVE IS PAINFUL AND LOVE IS SWEET
WHEN WE PUT THEM BOTH TOGETHER
THAT IS A SIGN THAT IS SHOWING
OURSELVES & EVERYONE ELSE
THAT OUR LOVE IS TOTALLY TRUE AND
MIRACULOSLY COMPLETE.
LOVE IS A TEST THAT ALL OF US MUST TAKE
WE WILL LEARN THAT THERE ARE PLENTY OF PLEASANT MOMENTS
AND ALSO SOME
TREMENDOUS HEARTBREAKS & GRIEF.
IF OUR HEART IS BREAKING MORE THEN WE HAD EXPECTED
THEN MABE WE WERE ONLY INFATUATED
WITH THESE GUYS
AND THAT TRUE & HONEST PERSON THAT IS
ONLY JUST FOR YOU & ME
IS STILL DESTINED TO ARRIVE.
SO WE SHOULD NOT GIVE UP OR BECOME DISCOURAGED WITH LOVE
BECAUSE WHEN IT IS TIME FOR THAT RIGHT PERSON TO COME ALONG
THE TRUE AND HONEST LOVE THAT WE WILL SHARE WITH ONEANOTHER
WILL MOST DEFFENTLY BEGIN
AND
ETERANALY FLORISH.
2007-03-11 07:21:08 · 23 answers · asked by bigred 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
I liked, I like, I like to use this sometimes on my honey.
Isn't writing poetry nice, because you can really get your feelings down on paper.
"Keep up the good work, U romantic U"
****I had to add***
Don't go along with the "divorce-screamers", because it does not always turn sour - work on your relationship.
1. My first marriage=horrible, he should have married his mother.
2. My second marriage is 31 (marriage, not husband) years young, we are still holding hands after all these years, and he is glad that he married me and not his mother.
Happy years for you.
2007-03-19 05:42:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The lyrical meter is off . It has real meaning yet kind of hard to keep your attention on. Sometimes shorter and sweeter and more rhyming words say more than a long drawn out poem that does not tend to keep your attention. Also you misspelled eternally and flourish. Not trying to get down on you just trying some constructive criticism. Get your message across without so much dragging it on. Good luck. Go to www.poetry.com and search for Tina Denise Adkins and you will find some of my poems and maybe get the idea of what I am saying. Just remember no plagiarism.lol
2007-03-19 02:22:35 · answer #2 · answered by jonsgirl1972 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like your poem, because you are very right, love can be both wonderful and painful, and to try to understand it or explain it all is useless. In my opinion, any love that can survive the very tough times in life is the one that must endure...and thats why the challenge is there, to test it. Take care.
2007-03-11 14:36:43 · answer #3 · answered by Paul 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your poem is excellent!!! You must be a romantic person indeed!!! I am one of those who believe in true love and forever love.Fate and Destiny..... Love truly hurts....when you're hurt...it means that you are in love.Being in love is the greatest thing on Earth!!!
2007-03-19 07:09:44 · answer #4 · answered by honeypot 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Very nice, if you want to turn it in for a school or a competition...make sure you do some check spell....
Good luck
2007-03-19 09:44:51 · answer #5 · answered by Ariana 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love sucks! Don't trust anyone! After 30 years, and a divorce, I KNOW! Keep your head on straight kid! GOOD LUCK!
2007-03-19 07:21:16 · answer #6 · answered by eizus28 7 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I don't have time for this. Stop beating around the bush and ask a question.
2007-03-19 13:21:32 · answer #7 · answered by Buckwheat 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's nice, but would have looked better in lower case!
2007-03-19 06:49:00 · answer #8 · answered by RAGGYPANTS 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
all boys donot like long lenghty poems they always want short poems shorten it
2007-03-19 06:20:11 · answer #9 · answered by Aashi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice.
2007-03-16 10:05:13 · answer #10 · answered by lordydordy42 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋