I know there’s something, that I do not see
But I can feel it, all around me
It gives me warm feelings, when I act really good
As I get older, I now act as I should
It might be my age, that I am starting to feel
Helping my soul, I am trying to heal
When I now sleep, beside my new wife
I do remember, those times in my life
I wasn’t perfect I did all the things
That being young, we just called them flings
My mind wasn’t molded, I didn’t think clearly
I think I hurt people, that I loved real dearly
I heard of angels, but I truly don’t know
If they were around me, shouldn’t they glow
I’ve heard some stories, more good then are bad
For those who see angels, for you I am glad
Maybe sometime, someday or someplace
I’ll meet my angel, she’ll show her face
Something inside me, answers my plea
Why look for an angel, one sleeps beside me
2007-03-11 06:24:44 · 12 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
10-lucky wife!!
2007-03-11 06:27:54 · answer #1 · answered by life coach 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-03-11 15:08:21 · answer #2 · answered by seahorse 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a 10 it is very good. It's also very lovely & romantic.
Keep up the good work.
2007-03-11 13:42:06 · answer #3 · answered by bigred 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you made me cry. in a good way.
YOUR WIFE IS THE LUCKIEST WOMAN,(NEXT TO ME, THAT IS)
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
it takes a real man to write beautiful words like that,
my husband would write stuff like that, he just has dyslexia and a bad speller. I would have to do a spell check b4 i could read what he wrote,LOL
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL
2007-03-15 13:15:32 · answer #4 · answered by heatherclhn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww....When are you going to give her this poem? Thats Sweet and Caring!! 10+
2007-03-11 13:59:42 · answer #5 · answered by blondieoftexas 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad, methinks an 8.
2007-03-11 13:30:22 · answer #6 · answered by mixedup 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you a molestor? you sleep with little boys and girls?
I say an 8
2007-03-11 13:31:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
9...not a poet, but can appreciate a good one.
2007-03-11 13:59:34 · answer #8 · answered by ckgene 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
12...beautiful poem
2007-03-11 13:41:45 · answer #9 · answered by Nothing but the truth...!! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10 for me too..Lucky u & Lucky wife........Great communicator is what u r!!
2007-03-11 14:01:20 · answer #10 · answered by cindy j 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋