im having no luck :S ! need help writing it. got any ideas. or verses that could give me a boost?? xx thank yoo!
2007-03-11 04:43:09 · 7 answers · asked by lauren k 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Think about things that you think might suck in high school. Write a list of those ideas on a sheet of paper. You can use those ideas to create verses in your song.
Here are some examples:
Food in the cafeteria surely reeks.
Tests stress me so much
Yelled so much I can barely speak.
2007-03-11 04:52:56 · answer #1 · answered by Sylvie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
teachers say hush up hush but we need to speak up loud
we have to wear uniforms while standing out from the crowd
cafetaria food from last week doesnt taste any better today
my best friend could talk me through the math test but said she's away.
and no one listens to the homework excuses we made
daydreams go round and around my head chalk dust starts to fade.
marker pens and teachers saying "now then! get back to work!" as my attentions fading and boy are planning to make the teacher go beserk.
god knows.
try listening to a song by "get cape. wear cape. fly" called "call me ishmael" or just look for the lyrics. it a very "i want to break out of this boring life full of regulations and the same thing every day!" imagine that to a pop rock sound.
2007-03-11 07:56:06 · answer #2 · answered by april9rockstar 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pick a hook, something that will make people listen to it. How about....
"It's gotta end soon" or "I can't stand another day" or "There has to be an end".
Think of the emotion of waiting for the end or the treadmill you feel you are on (I'm I wide of the mark on this one?). Make this your chorus, it's what people will remember the song for, apart from the melody and build up from there even if it's to keep referencing back to it.
2007-03-11 05:20:51 · answer #3 · answered by guitarcjj 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i get up way to early
when its dark and cold
i want to get this over with
before i get too old
toe the line doing time
writing papers should be a crime
teachers screaming at me for dreaming
its all double dutch, and i dont know the meaning...
oh wake me up and tell me im dreaming
take me away and stop me screaming...
teachers teach, but they just cant do
miserable pigs who scream at you...
failed individuals biding their time
missing homework is a capital crime...
2007-03-11 05:02:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Woke up this morning,the pain was kicking in
The bell for school was ringing,the kids were makin' a din..
i say I woke up this morning,another day of High school blues...etc,etc...
2007-03-15 01:48:44 · answer #5 · answered by rab333 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
think about the things you hate about it and put together the ones that rhyme. i would make it a metal song
2007-03-13 10:19:12 · answer #6 · answered by greg g 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
only 2 more years of high school
but my teacher is a shy fool
he says i gotta wait until I'm 16 years of age
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2007-03-11 04:51:29 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋