Song, Poem or Delirium? .. I feel like writing something again?

Question

This came to me a few minutes ago.

You
When as you come close to me
When life brings me down
It's your sweet embrace
That is forever in my heart
Like the warm glow of the sun on my face
There is nothing that can compare
I will do anything for you

How many years have you given me
My work takes me where you are not
When I see you close
I can’t believe how beautiful you are
Kisses for a moment
How did you get into my mind
Who let you in

You
Love, Pain and Happiness
In this life I will take it all
When I am next to you
I feel like I can fly

Come closer to me
Like strangers on a moonlit night
If you give it all to me
I will make you mine
How could this be
Are you a dream
an image in my mind

Think of me
When life has you deceived
How I wish you would think of me
I will be there for you
Nothing can compare to true love

I will chant that the rain may come down
The winds become steady
So that the sky may be a little bluer
all I want is to see you smile

Baby I love you
Smile to me now.

Answer 1

You are gifted guy, maybe you should try to publish your work.

Answer 2

Beautiful! You're very talented, so please write more.
Here's one of mine I'd like to share with you. It's called...

No Strings Attached

No strings attached, we're both free to go
No strings attached, it will always be so
So, don't fall for me for I'll never stay
When the party's all over, I'll just walk away
But. while I'm still here I'll bring you a smile
I'll make love real slow, make it last for awhile
Now kis me my love, and surrender it all
Lets heed the lovely siren's call

Warm moonlight through my window shines
The woods beyond, their secrets hide
Her lacy gown slips to the floor
Revealing all, there's nothing more
Soft candles flickering in the night
Beholds rare beauty in its light
And, trembling there she offers me
The virgin love no man has seen

Exquisite woman, her body free
Am I teaching her, or is she teaching me?
Long fragrant hair cascades o'er the pillow
Outside the soft winds caress the green willow
I drink in her body, a vision of dreams
Help me please, God, lest I part at the seams
Without reservation she offers her all
My soul, how it hungers to hear her love call

I kiss the soft lips and her breasts as she sighs
Taste the sweet juices and kiss the firm thighs
I help her discover where she's never been
She discovers it over, and over again
It began as a sigh, turning into a moan
Now deep primal screams just keep on and on
No longer naive, now all woman charm
I cannot believe what I hold in my arms

I hold her and rock her, kiss her face and her tears
For such perfect love, I've waited these years
I love you my angel, I'll die if we part
Promise you'll stay, please don't break my heart
"How soon you've forgotten your words from before
'No strings attached,' and they hurt to the core"
Slipping into the night, o'er her shoulder she cast
"Perhaps your future got lost in your past"

Innocence given can ne're be retrieved

By Nova Starr
2006