Well, in my story there's a girl named Holly and she meets this one dude who turns out 2 be a ferox ( a type of vampire that i made up..). His name is Cedric, and cedric really likes her and helps her out through a lot of tough situations...but Holly likes Scott, a stupid jock who was only using her. So basically Holly gets hurt emotionally because of Scott then physically and Cedric goes after Scot for revenge. It ends up with Holly in the hospital. Does that sound good? Thx!
2007-03-10 11:51:37 · 7 answers · asked by skyrocketmoon 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
lol..thx ever1! the only down side is that my friends r gonna murder me if i dont make Holly end up with Cedric..and let me no if u want 2 read the story! ^_^ ive already written half of it....
2007-03-10 12:06:32 · update #1
I like that you made up a type of vampire. That's interesting. I just hope you can stay away from making it too much like Twilight - you really need to make it stand out and apart from it - same genre, but different story.
Does Cedric have to go after Scott? Maybe his pals go after Scott instead and Cedric tries to save him (even though he is a scum - maybe he even uses Holly in an attempt to save himself). Holly can still get hurt, but in the meantime she's learned what Scott was and how great Cedric is. And if she ends up in a coma and sees things outside her body...
You keep on going, lady! This is the type of story so many are looking for today. Have fun.
2007-03-16 16:16:04 · answer #1 · answered by Isthisnametaken2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The idea sounds good. I like it! Hope it turns out!
2007-03-10 11:55:28 · answer #2 · answered by f.ireworks 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes. Good luck! <3
2007-03-10 11:58:26 · answer #3 · answered by kelsey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yea!!! It sounds good.
2007-03-10 15:39:27 · answer #4 · answered by sunflowerdaisy94 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it! i like writing too, keep it up!
2007-03-10 12:03:47 · answer #5 · answered by dcarcia@sbcglobal.net 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really like it!!!!!!! its a good idea!!!!!!!
2007-03-11 12:50:23 · answer #6 · answered by Misz Drama Queen 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
totally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if u ever publish it, ill read it!!!
2007-03-10 12:01:41 · answer #7 · answered by cait12350 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋