i'm am sunshine on a rainy day to see it once then it go away but love makes you cry and it makes you pay but just keep smiling and it will be a brighter day and letting go is'nt saying good bye,it 's release someone or something who is holding you back from yourself.
2007-03-10 08:26:38 · 6 answers · asked by Lovely cryz 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
wow...ur truly a writer if u wrote this......wow. i luv it, it should be published.
2007-03-10 08:34:50 · answer #1 · answered by Lolly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's good...check it for grammer:
I'm like (the) sunshine on a rainy day. You see it once then it goes away. Love makes you cry and makes you pay but if you keep on smiling you'll get brighter each day. Letting go isn't easy, it's hard to say goodbye. But you've got to release someone or something who is keeping you from being yourself.
Just a thought.
2007-03-10 16:33:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's really beautiful but write it in a proper way.On Yahoo answers you hardly see a poem that warms your heart like this.
2007-03-10 16:31:51 · answer #3 · answered by uncoolmom 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good
2007-03-10 16:29:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good
2007-03-10 16:38:48 · answer #5 · answered by sea_star 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aw, it's very good. :)
2007-03-10 16:31:37 · answer #6 · answered by MOVED! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋