For homework our teacher put us in partners and told us to write a paragraph or poem about our partner. I don't want to write a boring paragraph, but I suck at poems. Can you help me make a poem about her, I am not supposed to say the name (we will then mix them up and try to guess who's it is)
Here are some of the things she likes (and her characteristics)
-Coke
-Converse
-Vampires
-Boys
-She has black hair and brown eyes
-She is Sri Lanken but since she is adopted she is also Australian
She is pretty popular and nice... I don't hang out with her which is why I kinda need some help...
2007-03-10 02:25:18 · 5 answers · asked by browncow 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I have a few things to say,
To a friend I know today.
Alike are we in many ways,
Drinking our cokes on the coolest of days.
Running through the grass with Converse on our feet,
My friend and I have yet to meet.
From boys to vampires, we see things the same,
It is a mystery to you to find out their name.
Last but not least, it is a lovely lass,
Who sees the world through darkened glass.
Although we come from different walks of life,
If our paths cross in friendship, it would be very nice.
2007-03-10 04:24:34 · answer #1 · answered by fifi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I answered on your other two questions so can't redo...but here is how I would edit your poem...by the way I really like how you used the details you presented.
I have a partner who’s name I cannot tell,
If I told you her name, you’d call me a rebel.
Her favorite drink is coke,
And loves to make jokes.
She adores converse shoes,
But she hates the blues.
She isn’t a baby; she isn’t into toys,
But nowadays she is, however, more into boys.
She is from sri lanka and has lovely black hair,
And who could of guessed, this poem came from Claire.
2007-03-10 11:11:02 · answer #2 · answered by Over The Rainbow 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
She's a nice and pretty gril who drinks coke and wears converse, with black hair, brown eyes we all know she's gonna prosper. I've seen how she acts when she's hangin with the boys, and like an undead vampire she's gonna make some noise. To be seen is a given, to be heard is gift! Bam wow I like it, hope you do too!! Try to put some umph in the words "undead vampire","noise" and"seen,given" slow down when you say" to be heard is a gift"
2007-03-10 11:01:18 · answer #3 · answered by Brian O 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Who is this gal?
This is your quest.
She is a class mate and has her own family tree.
I don't know her very well,
But would love to have the chance.
She loves coke and boys and so do I,
She loves vampires,
I wounder if it is because of the black hair.
Who is this person?
2007-03-10 10:37:16 · answer #4 · answered by jeeccentricx2 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow! Have people ever written some bad poems for you. There is NO way you could do worse on your own.
2007-03-10 11:39:13 · answer #5 · answered by balderarrow 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋