I write poetry..and lately Ive Written these lines..
and my head is stuck and cant get any more lines to finish it..
some hint pls?
I am lost in a dream
where it takes me through a picture of your smile.
2007-03-08 22:33:08 · 8 answers · asked by Gõlden angel 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Well, I’ll add a few lines; ideas, in prose, though. And it is your duty to put them in a poetic form.
I am lost in a dream
Where it takes me through a picture of your smile.
***
Your smile is as sweet as wild honey,
Intoxicating,
Like wine made by a monk,
Living in solitude,
In a solitary monastery,
***
It carries me to a faraway land,
Beyond the seven seas,
Where fairies live,
And brings me back,
To the land of reality,
Landing me gently,
As your smile is,
***
Both trips; back and forth,
Are, but the sweetness of your smile;
A life I yearn to live,
Your smile is,
And your open arms; a worm welcome,
An innocent invitation to submit myself,
To the God of love.
Rephrase and compose your poem.
Good luck!
2007-03-08 23:15:13 · answer #1 · answered by Aadel 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow. i didnt know you were into poems !! good luck with that
.hey why dont u change ur pic back ? really we cant tell if its you anymore!!!
and hell ! im going to write a peom about george bushs daughters. so we can both be on the same page
bye
2007-03-09 10:03:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
too the very depths of your mind,
where i see everything but, the thing i want.
I am stuck in the dream or the smile,
all in all i can't tell if it's a smile or a dream.
2007-03-09 06:51:10 · answer #3 · answered by davidwco 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I tumble for endless miles,
Landing in a dream not my own,
2007-03-09 12:01:19 · answer #4 · answered by bubbas_bookworm 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a false face to be discarded
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2007-03-09 06:52:19 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
and i want to make this reality
so now i've got you on speed dial
2007-03-09 06:53:47 · answer #6 · answered by janicebks 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
... i try not to scream
2007-03-09 06:45:30 · answer #7 · answered by jooria 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
without any tears
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2007-03-09 06:40:34 · answer #8 · answered by *srikanth .g* 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋