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I just found this paper lying on the ground, what do you think of it?

Deep down in my soul there are scars.
Once they were wounds that I had locked away, afraid to talk About them.
Now they are hele, but they have left great scars upon my soul, And nothing will ever make them go away.
I try to hide and disguise them, but deep down on my soul they Are still there.
I ignore them and tell no one about them, but that only makes The pain feel worse.
I wonder what it would be like, if I had never been hurt so much.
But its hard to imagine something you've never felt before.

2007-03-08 19:23:04 · 4 answers · asked by novagirl117 4 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

Not hele, I misspelled healed.

2007-03-08 19:25:27 · update #1

4 answers

there are lots of scars people might get, but as i read this i remember the poem i made in Filipino entitled "PILAT" (scars in English). Because as i had finished reading until the last line it made me think that the "something you've never felt before" is in regards with loving someone deeply and madly, yet this someone had left and so the pain was there. Pain that can't be healed even times passed, pain that would still bring back the memories wherein you felt that you almost have him but you're not really meant for each other. The reality that triggers your heart that his feelings are not that deep or there are some differences both of them can't make up.
It's a good poem for me because it already woke me up that until now i still have that scars...

2007-03-08 19:48:45 · answer #1 · answered by chie 1 · 1 1

its a very good poem which tells abt life friends enymies neighbours and all

2007-03-08 19:53:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

good poem :D

2007-03-08 19:31:42 · answer #3 · answered by Whisper G 1 · 0 1

really good but a little sad.........

2007-03-09 03:49:44 · answer #4 · answered by bubbas_bookworm 2 · 0 1

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