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Foreign investment in the country that has been realized in 2006 was US$2 million. However, this amount decrased compared to that in 2005 reaching US$ 3 million.

2007-03-08 18:25:34 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

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The grammar is not as troublesome as the excess verbiage. Try: "Foreign investment in the country was $2 million in 2006, down from $3 million in 2005." Neat and clean.

2007-03-08 18:35:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

The country's foreign investment realized in 2006 was US$2 million. However, this amount was a decrease from the 2005 investment, which was US$3 million.

2007-03-09 02:38:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Foreign investment in the country, that had been realized in 2006, was US $2 million. However, this amount decreased compared to that in 2005, reaching US $3 million.

Personally I'd use
In 2006, Foreign investment in the country was US $2 million. However, compared to US $3 million in 2005, this amount decreased.

2007-03-09 02:32:52 · answer #3 · answered by Ian B 3 · 0 0

Foreign investment in the country, that had been realized in 2006, was US$2 million. However, this amount decreased compared to that in 2005, when it was US$ 3 million.

2007-03-09 02:30:28 · answer #4 · answered by ignoramus 7 · 0 0

What I would write is as follows:
Foreign investment in the country had been calculated to be US$2 million in 2006.. However, this amount decreased compared to that in 2005 which reached US$ 3 million.

I didnt agree with how your first sentence was written so I changed it. I put "reached" cuz you are talking about the past.

2007-03-09 02:33:33 · answer #5 · answered by R.S. 4 · 0 0

Short sentence? Looks like 2 confusing sentences. How about:

Foreign investment realized in the country in 2006 was US$2 million which was less than the US$3 million reached in 2005.

Note: I just read the guys sentence above me... his is better than mine.

2007-03-09 02:36:34 · answer #6 · answered by theegorider 2 · 0 0

'has been realized' may very well be replaced by "was realized" !

2007-03-09 09:32:04 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

had

2007-03-09 02:47:38 · answer #8 · answered by Manz 5 · 0 1

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