Poem anyone?? Can you reply with your own?

Question

Why does your leaving not surprise me? Why do you feel that one word can surmise me?Do you think I'll shrivel and fall to the ground?Girl you know my strength and in me nothing like that can be found.There is no denying that I have given my best shot,Too bad you want more out of life than what I've got.At one time my love for you flowed deeper than the nile,And yet you were looking elsewhere all the while.It's too late to repair the love that once was,You see,this is what being unfaithful always does.In your new life I wish you luck and hope you'll find your way in this world,I,ll never lose the lessons I've learned from you,and was once proud to call you my girl. As we say good-bye,please,don't come too close,As I may remember the love that is now just a ghost.I don't need sympathy for the tears in my eyes,Just a few feet of space too walk out with my chin held high.I'll pray for you,'cause thats what a good man does,I pray you'll find a better love,Than the love that once was.

Answer 1

I cannot change what has been and gone, My heart still hungers, my suffering long.
Come live with me and be my love, And we can live free like turtle doves.

Tomorrow is a new day, we'll be together no matter what storm comes, our love can't be measured, sticking together come what may, and facing the world and all it's haze.

I must tell you your poem truly moved me... like i said before i like your writing style, and you have talent.

Answer 2

This is a poem I wrote in response to "Lucky" by Brittney Spears. I am not making this up. Well, the poem is highly fictionalized, but the reason is the truth

Rotten

I am your puppet, you control the strings.
I make you feel good,
As you knew I would,
You can’t see the hatred it brings.

Locked away in a gilded cage
It binds my soul inside
I guess I should be thankful
You can’t see I’m rotten inside

Put a needle in my arm
To try to break the wall
The higher the drug will let me fly,
The further down I fall.

The world sees me the lucky one,
The one you want to screw
Power, Honor, Money, Fun,
If only you knew

The greatest cell is still a cell,
A cage is still a cage
The only way to leave the cell
Is death or middle age

If you really cared about me,
You’d hear it in my song
You’d know my fame has trapped me
From the freedom my heart longs

But you carry on dancing to the beat
And make me who I’m not
So to the world, I’ll wear this mask,
While my heart begins to rot

And when you wonder where I am,
When youth is dead and gone
I only hope my soul survives
To finally see the dawn

Answer 3

Beautiful poem. I'll put you on my watchlist and give you a star. Here's one of my own I'll write right now.

These wounds do seep with words I weep
The blood shall trickle further deep
There's nothing more than pain i seek
For i am lost in this world so meak
When will i be worthy of
Any kind of painless love
I'm fading slowly hurting still
And losing power, losing will
In the darkness i shall remain
For there's nothing else my blood will stain.

Answer 4

I am almost speechless (for once). Your poem was beautiful, I'm in awe. My poor bud, now I feel sad for you.

Answer 5

lovely, heres mine:

chocolate cake
chocolate cake
eat so much
you get a tummy ache

Answer 6

It is very haunting and I just cannot come up with something to top it.

Answer 7

Of course I can,


"your own"

there satisfied?

Answer 8

no.