is this a good introduction for an essay on the book the great gatsby? what can the topic be?

Question

Is it better to be happy in pursuing dreams or to fulfil them and later realize that they weren’t as perfect as it seemed when one was not chasing them? Men, who base their future objectives on past experiences, will end up destroying their own dreams. In Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby, Jay Gatsby, in his past created an obsessive illusion, a vision of himself and Daisy living in a perfect world, in which lead him to destroy his own life. It is Gatsby's ideals and illusions created by his past that blind him to reality, and to the path of his life. WHAT CAN I CHANGE? WHAT CAN A BETTER "HOOK" OR ATTENTION GRABBER BE?

Answer 1

It sounds pretty good to me... except change ". . .in which lead him to. . . " to "which leads him to. . ." Otherwise, it sounds like a good beginning. Good luck!

Answer 2

You talk with regard to the Jazz age and the glaring corruption of the mob and prohibition. You talk approximately Gatsby's devotion for Daisy, a logo of the yank dream, and how that devotion replaced into unworthy.

Answer 3

thats good enough for me. u got the brief summary of the book in there. so thats good. good luck wit that!