Thesis Statement about Globalization research paper...............thanks...?

Question

Does any one can help me to come up with a thesis statement about the Globalization? My point is Globalization is good, it helps to increase economy, etc.
Here are what I wrote, but my teacher said I did not state what my arguement is.......

Labor and product exchanges become a prevailing way in nowadays society.

Today’s globalization concept is mainly used in three areas, business, culture, and politics.

America can stand in the strongest country in the world should attribute to its well globalization systems.

Thanks for helping me....

Answer 1

sorry, but u r incorrect in your assumption that globalization is good for the U.S., globalization is destroying the American social compact designed after world war 2, which was setup to help america as a whole, with newer technologies being created, jobs are being moved over seas, people r losing jobs to more educated talented people, the segment of unionization is detteriorating, social inequality is widening among the rich and the poor, how is this helping america?

Answer 2

Read this closely and see the example on globalization.


The thesis sentence is a clear, concise statement of the position you will defend in your
paper. The thesis sentence should argue a position, not summarize information.When composing your thesis sentence, • make sure your thesis reflects the full scope of your argument.
• avoid using a thesis that is too broad to be defended in the your paper or too narrow to be a full response to the assignment.• argue as conceptually rich a position as you can support. Ask yourself How? and Why? questions to deepen your thesis.• make sure your reader can easily identify your thesis sentence.
• do not just reword the professor’s question; claim your own position.A thesis sentence that is too broad:
The Catholic Church’s influence on the formation of labor unions in the nineteenth
century was extremely significant.
A more focused thesis sentence:
The Catholic Church, by means of the pulpit and the purse, greatly influenced the labor
movement in the United States during the final decades of the nineteenth century.Note that the second sentence concisely summarizes a specific argument that can be
managed in a short paper. It also sets up the pattern for discussion; the writer will focus
first on the Church’s direct instruction and then on its financial influence.
Also note the effect of using the stronger verb “influenced” in the second sentence rather
than “was” in the first sentence.


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Globalization is a socially polarizing movement. Some people view it as the way of the future, while others see it as the source of current global discontent. Over the past half-century, leaders in the global economic system have encouraged the liberalization of the free market in hopes that globalization would spread the wealth of developed nations to the rest of the world. In recent years, however, awareness of the detriments of globalization has increased. Activist groups, non-governmental organizations, and developing governments have put increasing scrutiny on the organizations that power globalization, the most important of which are the World Trade Organization, the International Monetary Fund, the World Bank, and the governments of wealthy nations. Close analysis of case studies and comprehensive statistics shows that the hypocrisy of institutions and of wealthy nations, as well as the rigidity of the global economic system, have prevented the benefits of globalization from reaching the world’s poorest nations.
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Good luck

Answer 3

You need to make a factual statement of what globalization is and form a bold argument as to what you intend to present. You will need to research and substantiate sources for your argument. What you have written thus far is somewhat confusing to the reader. I would suggest that you make simple, straightforward sentences and check your spelling as well.
Example:The concept of Globalization is an umbrella term referring to increased interdependence in the economic, social, technological, cultural, political, and ecological spheres. Benefits from Globalization have included greater international travel and tourism, economic diversity, (and what ever you choose to write). The problem with Globalization is __________.(This should be your last sentence in your opening paragraph.)