Hi, could you please help me with my introduction. the beginning goes like "Everybody at least once in their life time asks questions like “why me?” Someone might ask herself these either they were expecting something else or didn’t want any changes in their life at that moment."
now i cant think of other things to write, can you please help me with what else could i write to make it longer?
Thanks
2007-03-08 11:54:29 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Some grammar advice about your intro: your pronouns aren't consistent. You have used everybody, their, someone, herself, they, and their. Some are singular and some are plural, and it makes it difficult for the reader to make sense of it. How about this:
Someone might ask herself this because she was expecting something else, or didn't want any changes in her life at that moment.
2007-03-08 11:59:46 · answer #1 · answered by bibliophile31 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Everybody asks questions like "why me?" at least once in their lifetime. Someone might ask themselves these questions when having unsatisfied expectations or when not wanting to accept the change in their life.
Well, what is the point of your paper? Are you going to explain a situation in which unsatisfied expectations or change occured? What happens when people have to deal with these problems? Why do they react this way? Why are people unhappy when this happens?
2007-03-08 20:02:59 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋