Lying here all alone from the corner i must roam,,,,Down that road to history back,,,,My years have youth i lack,,, Hair gone grey just like that smelling like a gutter rat,,,,Unheard and unseen living in a bad dream,,,,The cards are falling all around my turns coming for the ground
2007-03-08 10:35:40 · 5 answers · asked by ALLEN P 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I think you have real potential as a poet. Don't stop expressing yourself.
2007-03-08 10:40:01 · answer #1 · answered by Amara 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well, Edger.. i personally think your poems are pretty good. I'm impressed.
keep writing them. i want to hear them all.
2007-03-08 19:08:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sound like they could be good lyrics, you thought about putting this to music?
2007-03-08 18:41:39 · answer #3 · answered by Jez 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sorry, dawg. It was a little pitchy to me. You know, not your best night. Paula?
2007-03-08 19:13:23 · answer #4 · answered by balderarrow 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good. Keep on writing.
2007-03-08 18:40:40 · answer #5 · answered by Barbiq 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋