Well I am not hoping to record it or anything but I thought it was cool. Just want some opinions on it.
FOREFATHERS REACH YOUR HAND
FIX WHAT WE HAVE DONE
AMERICA IS CRYING OUT
YOU SAVED US FROM THIS ONCE
GUIDE US TO THE VISION
YOU ONCE DREAMED FOR US
KNOCK DOWN THE BEASTS IN CHARGE
RETURN HOPE TO EVERYONE
ASHAMED WE HANG OUR HEADS
AS THEY LEAD US TO OUR DOOM
WHERE ARE ALL THE SAFEEGUARDS
YOU ONCE HAD THOUGHT THROUGH
WE ARE CHILDREN OF A TYRANNY
THESE WHIMS TEAR US APART
DESTROYING OUR SECURITY
OUR SELF RESPECT IS GONE
FEARFULLY WE LIVE OUR LIVES
BECAUSE OF THOSE IN CHARGE
FOOLS DIVIDED MAKE NO SENSE
TAKE BACK WHAT IS STILL OURS
REVOLUTION.....HAS IT COME TO THIS
THOMAS JEFFERSON NEVER SAW THIS
OUR NATION......IS SCREAMING FOR HELP
AND IT'S TIME TO STOP BEING KIDS
ON THE WORDS OF OUR FATHER'S WE'RE TAKING IT BACK
WE'RE FIGHTING FOR WHAT THEY HAD WRITTEN
NO FOOLISH BOYS
TREATING SOLDIERS LIKE TOYS
ARE GOING TO REALIZE THEIR VISION
REVOLUTION.....HAS IT COME TO THIS
THOMAS JEFFERSON NEVER SAW THIS
OUR NATION......IS SCREAMING FOR HELP
AND IT'S TIME TO STOP BEING KIDS
2007-03-08 09:24:18 · 9 answers · asked by aouija 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
cool. patriotic. intelligent.
i like that its not about romance, we have enough love songs already
2007-03-08 09:27:21 · answer #1 · answered by hairspray queen 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-03-08 09:28:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-09-30 09:58:22 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
potentially it could be a winner. But I don't usually like songs that rant and rave about politics. Just my opinion.
2007-03-08 09:29:37 · answer #4 · answered by sputmonkey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good to me but without knowing what backing music you have with it,its pretty hard to judge.
2007-03-08 09:28:23 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah cool
2007-03-08 09:28:30 · answer #6 · answered by LU S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is really good and you have talent keep doing what your doing cause its working
2007-03-08 09:28:01 · answer #7 · answered by Jessie S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good. It's thought provoking, so it has my vote. : )
2007-03-08 09:34:51 · answer #8 · answered by Chistiaŋ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its crap, no offense
2007-03-08 09:32:19 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋