title: Lost In My Mind
By: Amber Brazil
Lost to what becomes of me,
every crumb is on the ground,
to make a puzzle of the pieces
would be circles before found'
beating around the choices ,
beating around the bush,
pushing all the buttons but
nothing seems to work,
losing concentration even
sense of time,what will come
tome me must future so
define,so lost inside the
choices that my soul
would so refine.
2007-03-08 03:01:19 · 8 answers · asked by Big girl 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
thought i should let you know this person in the poem is me and its directed toward my school life
2007-03-08 03:15:42 · update #1
Sounds like a poem about daydreaming.
2007-03-08 03:06:39 · answer #1 · answered by Gone fishin' 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds as though this person feels as though they have no control over their life. They are at a point where they need to make a decision, but can't seem to. So will exist allowing the decision to make itself. Thus be defined by the future rather than creating the future.
2007-03-08 03:11:17 · answer #2 · answered by kayaress 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds as though it is a person who is having trouble with focus and concentration, trying to decide what they want to do with their life, but not really coming up with any answers. It is someone definitely internalizing their problems rather than getting out in the world.
2007-03-08 03:07:24 · answer #3 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds as though you are having a hard time making decisions in your life. One could pray for direction.
2007-03-08 05:30:48 · answer #4 · answered by jackson 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
One shouldn't have to interpret good poetry. You are too deep in yourself. Force the world to understand. The poet is born, you were hatched.
2007-03-08 03:47:45 · answer #5 · answered by Jrahdel 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
having trouble figuring out what his voice is or what is he doing with his life at the moment..... it's one of those era evey teen goes through....I have that too.. and yeah! U will keep feelin empty until U found urself...
2007-03-08 03:36:21 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
past is past my dear you can't bring it back all your frustration,heartache,sufferings and all your depressions live it now.face the fact-the future-the present that you're move'n in now.show them that you can make it the second time around stand and be firm-strong.love your life and the people around you.your future depends on-to you.
2007-03-10 20:55:23 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Focusing and concentration around school are hard for you.
2007-03-10 10:10:31 · answer #8 · answered by mimegamy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋