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Okay this is the second time i've posted this i know but most people werent getting that it is in three parts so I'm am going to try to find away to post it all together...if you hate it then kindly get the message of the poem and dont post....and if you do post something mean then you should at least have some way for me to contact you by Email or IM because then I can at least call you on it



An Ode To Critics

Come, right this way
Sit on the throne
As I let my poems relay
I dust off your shoes and wait in anticipation
As you spit at my paper
Throwing it down in indignation

“What is this?” You say with a sneer,
“Your lines are rhymed and it just does not flow
Your stanzas are wrong and this poem just has to go
Your emotions are cluttered and do that does not work
Why would you waste my time on this dreadful piece of dirt?”

I stare in horror as you rip my poem apart
Critiquing every err that came from my heart
You point and you prod until there is nothing left
Except a small pile of shreds that were once my soul
Spilled out on a paper that you found horribly dull

My eyes filled with distress
My heart brimming with detest
“My poems might rhyme
And my emotions proudly show
But I do not need your approval
About something I already know”

“I am a good writer and this poem is for all just like you
For all those critics who do not know what there words surely do
You rip at people’s hearts and steal away there glow
Because you believe you know how a real poem should flow

You think you are better than all the rest
But there is one thing that you cannot attest
Do you ever put your heart on the line?
Asking other’s opinions and hoping to shine?

Do you ever write something so great?
To only have your words ripped up in front of your face?
Or do you hide behind your screen-
Maliciously typing everything you can think of to be purposely mean?

This is an ode to all those who take joy in ripping people’s emotions
Taking their ideas and making snide, unwelcome notions
You do not know us or why we write!
But now you know that we will not stand for your plight

Yes this poem is cheesy
And its rhymes are way off mark
But I do not care what you say
For I know I do not stand alone in the dark

I can take criticism like everyone else
Helpful comments here and there
But when you trample my feelings and spit at my work
I can not help but secretly smirk

What you do not know is I find you amusing
With your little words and condescending accusing
What you do not know is that as you cower behind your screen in disgrace
I laugh at the fact you are not brave enough to show your face

If you have a problem with this poem I apologize
I do not mean to offend
But you should realize by now that no matter what you do
You will not win

Behind this admittedly immature poem you probably find horrid
Lays a message that is clear and concise
Write what you want but know deep inside
That your words come from a bitter, envious disguise

Answer 1

Good for you for writing poetry. No spitting, sneering or indignation here, but your poetry does need work if it is to be worth reading and thinking about. If you are at all serious, may I recommend a careful study of this site?

http://www.poeticbyway.com/glossary.html

Answer 2

Hmmm ... zounds lik a set-up 2 mi

Answer 3

probably so, I think