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There was no traffic, I hadn't expected ther would be at this late hour. A hundred or so yards ahead I was startled to see a male figure in light colored pants and shirt running into the road . A split second later I saw the truck, a dark grey , lifted, one of those 4 wheel drive types barrel out of the woods and run into the man sending him flying into the air. The truck slammed on the brakes then swung a sharp right in the direction away from me racing toward the horizon on the road ahead. I sat for a moment stunned I must have thrown on my brakes because I was parked in the middle of the road.. My instincts as a paramedic kicked in. I grabbed my emergency kit, It contained gloves, and a few supplies. I put my gloves on in the car also instinct for a paramedic at an accident scene. I examined the victim. Checked for a pulse, no sign of life. I needed help, I tore off the gloves use the cars onstar then back to start CPR..The lifeless body was gone. Only my bloody gloves remained.

2007-03-07 16:39:16 · 6 answers · asked by childofthefifties 3 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

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When you checked for a pulse you didn't do it right. The Pt was actually an athlete and was normally bradycardic. J/k. Sounds good so far. You got to post the final so we can all see it

2007-03-13 16:00:24 · answer #1 · answered by James S 3 · 1 0

Your story starts out like the poem by Alfred Noyes:

The wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees
The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon the cloudy seas
The road was a ribbon of moonlight over the purple moor
And the highwayman came riding,
Riding, riding,
The highwayman came riding, up to the old inn-door....

2007-03-15 14:46:49 · answer #2 · answered by fra59e 4 · 0 0

This is a recurring dream. The bloody gloves are the symbolic of residual guilt over not saving someone. Story can continue with dreamer waking up, and going to work as medical/emergency professional...then you'll need a romantic conflict as well.

2007-03-11 23:53:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1 1

I'm picturing the story leading to some twist of superhuman/alien feats, one where a man that can appear to be dead can get up, and walk or run away from this type of situation.

Perhaps the truck was hunting him down?

Perhaps he was an angel to begin with?

Maybe the narrator was drunk or dreaming.

Keep it going! good luck!

2007-03-07 16:49:51 · answer #4 · answered by wash_yer_nuts 3 · 0 0

Nah...i'm continuously Randie... yet...I did date a Randy in intense college... he replaced into continuously Randy...yet randier throughout the great moon! =o) the great moon does effect my interest... I artwork interior the psychological well-being field...an entire moon in many situations skill extra busy than standard! it is appropriate to psychological well-being to boot because of the fact the medical field... each and all the crazies seem to get extra so! =o)

2016-11-23 14:43:27 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Sounds like something from a murder-mystery story! Had me on the edge of my seat!!! Tell me, oh please tell me~What happened next?!!! :) Pleeeeease!

2007-03-07 16:53:48 · answer #6 · answered by reifrj 3 · 0 1

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