I want to be a doctor when I grow up and I signed up for this class where you get to go to the hospital during school and help out... But only 30 people are allowed :-( So have to write an essay on Why I want that class? and how will that class benefit me personally and professionally? Please help me I want this class sooo badly. Thank you.
2007-03-07 11:09:32 · 8 answers · asked by Just Ask :-) 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
I don't understand the question.
You know what you need to do, the instructions are clear.
Let me put it to you like this.
Tell me, why do you want to take this class? I am a person with a question. Your essay is asking you to answer the question.
If I asked you to write why you liked money, could you explain to anyone why?
The other question you stated was posed was, "and how will that class benefit me personally and professionally?"
Just write what you know, not what you believe, or what your friends or relatives believe. You need to do some research here.
Your research should focus on backing up your first claim "Why I want that class".
For example "I would like to be registered in this class because of xyz", now to back it up "Being exposed to _____ where I can see how xyz is conducted will affect my " education variable, work variable......." decisions".
Just follow it that way, steer clear of words like I think or I believe, and focus on concrete statements, I will, I do, it is, it is not, I will, I won't........
Also after you type up the rough draft make sure to read it aloud, to make sure that it sounds like something you would want to hear coming out of your mouth, then check for punctuation and spelling errors.
2007-03-07 11:29:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
If your goal is truly to be Doctor, look beyond this one class and contact other hospitals about volunteering.
Consider taking a class to obtain your EMT (Emergency Medical Technician) license. Part of the requirements will be to volunteer in a Hospital Emergency room.
This will provide you with a day to day uinderstanding of being a Emergency Room Doctor.
2007-03-07 19:16:45 · answer #2 · answered by Conductor 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's never too soon to start the process of learning how to help others. I know there are a lot of ways to help others that I can be doing right now - but I want to help with medicine, by being a doctor, and I want to start working on that right now.
2007-03-07 19:13:09 · answer #3 · answered by Uncle John 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
well you want to be a doc so then write it on how you feel and wht you can do if you in turn became a doctor and just say wht you truly feel right now as you sit and think and just say what you think you will get out of the class
2007-03-07 19:14:38 · answer #4 · answered by boo_boo5001 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well Why do you what to be a doctor? How would you feel if you couldn't or didn't become one? Why do you want to do this? Why is it so interesting to you? Why is it your passion?
Answer those questions then form it into a essay!
good luck and God Bless!
2007-03-07 19:14:29 · answer #5 · answered by brooke f 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think if you want it that badly you should speak from the heart.
What are you going to do once you are a doctor..ask the patient to diagnose his/her self? Come on if it means that much to you... you already know what to say....
2007-03-07 19:14:10 · answer #6 · answered by healthynow 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
just write a perfict esay and im shure if u really have a pason of becoming a doctor your skills will guide u through. just be confandent, posotove, and just write your heart out!!
2007-03-07 19:15:12 · answer #7 · answered by natmonkeygal 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Tell them that you want to help people.
2007-03-07 19:16:41 · answer #8 · answered by ismelloffreak 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋