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You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday

I would like to chat on yahoo IM with any girl who likes my poem (or add me to your buddy list)

2007-03-07 06:48:12 · 4 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Society & Culture Other - Society & Culture

4 answers

This is a beautiful poem, some lucky someone is going to be cherished by you. You seem like a beautiful soul and I hope you get what you deserve, someone who appreciates you sincereness. Good luck to you and keep writing poems........

2007-03-07 06:58:56 · answer #1 · answered by alex grant 4 · 0 0

I think that your poem is really really great. if it's for a contest then you go girl!!

2007-03-07 14:53:03 · answer #2 · answered by Bob 3 · 0 0

are you from Nigeria trying to get money??

2007-03-07 14:51:19 · answer #3 · answered by â?¥ Pawya! 5 · 1 0

i love it its very semtamental. and sweet.

2007-03-07 14:51:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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