don't realy get it i needed the two points :)
2007-03-06 23:19:46
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answered by Anonymous
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Absolutely love poetry. Nothing expresses as well the inner feelings and complex nature of human kind. One of my own......
THE EMBRYO
I am alive,
but I don't exist
for experience
I have none.
If you would die then so must I
and none would see my face
or mourn its loss
The concept of
the baby here
is ill conceived
indeed, for I
would only live
if I were
born.
From need
to regenerate.
If you cannot
offer life, then,
I don't want
to live.
Consider,
would I thank
you for the
anguish and the pain
of being
an unwanted?
Who then would I blame?
If you would need
think that I
should live,
then I have
no need of
life.
I did not
ask to be
planted here.
Nor, do I
cry for birth.
For what,
without your
complete love,
is my life
really worth?
Unwanted and unkempt.
We eat,
we sleep,
we drink,
we live
as one.
Your blood
is mine,
we share
the air,
together,
alone.
What beats
within
this tiny
shell is,
you
and
another
not me
not,
yet............
2007-03-06 23:56:31
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answered by granpabear 3
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I prefer poems. What about this one :-
THE TRAGIC DEATH OF ROBIN HOOD
Robin Hood lay a-dying, he knew his end had come.
Around him were his merry men, Friar Tuck and Little John.
Alan A Dale and Will Scarlet, Maid Marian so fair.
They couldn’t leave him on his own, all his friends were there.
And then they heard poor Robin’s voice, faint and frail and weak.
They all leaned forward eagerly, to hear what he would speak.
“Prop me up upon my bed, give me my trusty bow.”
“The one that’s served me well for years, and an arrow, straight and true.”
“Then open wide the window, and now hear my last request.”
“Wheresoe’er this arrow falls, there lay me down to rest.”
With all his strength he drew the bow and let the arrow fly,
Then collapsed upon his pillow and prepared himself to die.
They watched in awe the arrow’s flight, to see where it would drop.
And there they buried him next day, upon the wardrobe’s top.
2007-03-06 23:22:35
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answered by Anonymous
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geez when writing the poem, all the spelling is A wall, but u can still spell shut up probably, thats skill. anyhoo i really don't like poems, too cheesy and the flowery language is not personal at all, could be directed to anyone. nothing special i'm afraid.
2007-03-06 23:42:12
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answered by pixoncoke 4
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I Like poems. These were pretty good. Did you write them yourself?
The spelling and grammar were a bit skewed.... but it wasn't as bad as some people here seem to find it.
2007-03-06 23:23:43
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answered by Sunrise 5
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The poem is nice it just needs better wording and spelling.
2007-03-07 00:00:06
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answered by laney 5
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What is PEOMS ??
What I just read seems more like a POEM to me....
If that's what you meant then I would say good job for a start up...just need a bit of polishing and I think it would look much better.thanks for sharing.keep it up &
Good luck !!
2007-03-06 23:28:17
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answered by Anonymous
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it sounds like a good poem, but i could only get half way through before I got sick of how it's written. you're not txting the entire thing after all.
2007-03-06 23:19:00
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answered by lynn 5
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First of all, I am not a lover of poem..After reading some above, I started hating the poem.
2007-03-06 23:17:31
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answered by Anonymous
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Sleep
dO yOu dREAM Of THiNGs
Better THAN THiS LiFE?
THEN yOu SLEEP the SLEEP Of THe
SiLENT ONEs.
FiLL yOuR minds WiTH TRiViA and
UNEVENTFUL TiMeS
ANd SUFFER THe SEASONs Of ThE TRYST
ANd WATCh THe FAdiNG.
WiTh A CROCOdiLE TEAR IN yOuR EYE
WiShiNG IT was YoU.
JoShUA kANE
Copyright ©2007 JoShUA kANE
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2007-03-06 23:22:23
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answered by Anonymous
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I like them
2007-03-06 23:43:24
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answered by Steve 2
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