If it doesn't could you pleas help me? "Cavour was also responsible for the joining of southern areas he conquered with the Kingdom of Piedmont-Sardinia."
2007-03-06 13:17:16 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
first of all, you misspelled the word 'sense' in your question.
the sentence should read: Cavour was also responsible for the joinign of the southern areas that he conquered along with the Kingdom of Piedmont-Sardinia.
2007-03-06 13:31:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about:
Cavour was also responsible for joining the southern areas he had conquered with the Kingdom of Piedmont-Sardinia
2007-03-06 21:23:49 · answer #2 · answered by ohthecooljuice 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yep, it sounds pretty good. I would just change one thing:
Cavour was also responsible for the joining of southern areas which he conquered with the Kingdom of Piedmont-Sardina.
2007-03-06 22:02:44 · answer #3 · answered by Samantha 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me!
2007-03-06 21:22:05 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes it does make sense. bettyk
2007-03-06 21:31:56 · answer #5 · answered by elisayn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes but to make it make more sence..use commas
2007-03-06 21:22:04 · answer #6 · answered by •▐☺xXxHäV☼KxXx☺▐ • 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋