To those back home
I am gone
yet my memory will go on
kiss the kids I love them so
let them know I had to go
Tell my parents there are no regrets
to those who I fought beside
who came from nation wide
you are all my brothers and sisters
to my bride brush those tears aside
I am here so far yet so near
I am all around in the sky and in the ground
I am in our kids
in your heart
my love caries on
when u need me look to the sky
let your mind fly
I will be there holding your hand
goodbye to those I love
we will meet again one day
we will play in the heavens above
(Just wondering what people thought of my poem)
2007-03-06 12:56:37 · 3 answers · asked by Gypsy 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i wrote this thinking of what the soldiers over seas would want to say to their familes
2007-03-06 13:02:34 · update #1
i think it is very touching it brings tears to your eyes , if you can write a lot of poems you need to do a book , and good luck .
2007-03-06 14:29:02 · answer #1 · answered by foxie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful and tragic
2007-03-06 21:01:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's awesome!!! =D
2007-03-06 21:01:07 · answer #3 · answered by Dee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋